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Kiyoshi who traversed to the Ninja World
refused to bow down to any enemy and protect
Those he care's and love's
PS:This is my first work and It won't be a
fight at every word fiction . There will be
interaction between characters .No shocking
statements for mc at his every action
Single Heroine No harem
Thank you
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can't help but falling in love with the story. Kinda pity that Ino who will maried sai in naruto original story become kiyoshi lover. But its okay, that didn't mean anything.
Im too actually write a review, the story os not bad but far from good. The mc is literally a babysitter. He involves himslef with naruto's battles. The mc also is naruto 2.0 but without the yelling, he follows all of canon and in love with naruto and sauske. Also the higher ups fo leaf village dont question him, tsudne asks how he cutted a biju bomb and he says his bloodline. No one questions his technquies, power, or how he got them, just move on like its normal. If you want to re experince the naruto anime, go read this novel.
amazing amazing great great great great don't stop if u stop I will curse u till death ...................................... .......
Its decent to read, atleast is not annoying. How to be lowkey: 1.being the first place 2.befriend with naruto 3.pursue a clan girl Sigh
what happened? where are the chapters bruh? I remember reading this few months ago and I love it, and now I am planning rereading this but it's gone 😑😑😔
This is one of the best fanfics out there, I personally have reread this for atleast 5 times. As I was about to attempt my 6th, all of the chapters disappeared.. I am saddened by this fact so Author if you can, please bring back the chapters. Thank you.
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romance is well…. well, poorly finished, the idea is interesting, the content too, but it lacks depth, the speed of the story is very fast leaving out many aspects and summarizing long speeches in simple sentences, this leaves you with an interesting read, but not very relevant, you can enjoy this when you don't have anything to read and don't want to think too much.
I really like this story. Is there anywhere I can find it? I want to read it again. Even machine translation is acceptable.
I just finished reading all the published chapters in 2 hours (84 chapters), and I got to say I could see how the author improved throughout the story gradually. Frankly, I've read so many fanfics of Naruto that I don't really care if the plot is moving with Canon or not. I really hope the author will continue to publish more chapters soon :)
I really really enjoy the overallstory, your writing style and the character developement. So smooth to read and enjoyable. Please don’t drop this it’s gold
mc i want to be low key to avoid danzo , after a chapter the dude invite naruto to eat and become friend 0.0; ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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very good, especially after entering boruto MC It doesn't change because almost all fanfics that I read after having children the MC changes to their children, keep the spirit of updating...........
overall it isn't that bad, the first 10 chapters was a bit unsatisfactory for me. up until chapter 20 it gets better, I do hope author keeps improving.
I havent read the novel yet but I think you should post it in fanfiction section for more viewers and webnovel may take it down for copyright issues