/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Just a Background character
摘要
Waking up in the body of an untalented Genin, a Great Ninja war on the horizon, and a countdown to fulfill an impossible mission or else the being who sent him here will kill him, what's a background character like him must do? There was only one thing he could do, cheat. Thankfully, his broken system was repaired after a year of struggle.
Follow his journey, from being the weakest Genin to the most fearsome existence.
Advance Chapters:
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1. The MC won't be op immediately. All his power would be gained via hard work and training over the years.
2. There will be a lot of killing (not at the start, but once the MC gets stronger and the war starts.)
3. MC is a careful person who prioritizes his interests first. he won't show his full strength or put his life at risk unless there is no other choice.
What to expect :
1. Smart MC
2. MC manipulates the plot and characters to his advantage
3. Timeline is 1 year before the Third Great Ninja War
3. Movies arcs and few original characters.
4. Daily update
My Patreon: patreon.com/Calm_Storm
*****
Note:
Needless to say, for publishing more chapters. It would depend entirely on the interaction the story receives and the readers's enthusiasm for this book.
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overall, it's not a bad fanfic. If the MC is given a personality, it would improve drastically. There are very few interactions or even monologues, therefore he's about as interesting as the terms and conditions of a PC game
This doesn't seem bad, considering that it only has 6 chapters so far. The potential for greatness is there. Just keep the story clean and don't overly complicate things and you're good. Also, a little slide remark, please don't make this some overly 'tragic' story and at least let him have some friends to talk with. Helps to freshen up the content pool. All in all, can become something great, keep cooking. Cheers.
ok just a few issues involving the Mc, the Mc is weak but stealthy enough that he shouldn't be found by even the hokage sarutobi, but somehow every person he fights has every possible means to finding an invisible character. it feels pointles for him to have this one skill because it doesn't do what it is supposed to. it feels like forced tension for no reason other than to draw out everything. that or the author thought him have a great invisible skill decided to nerf the main character without actually nerfing the main character, but by boosting every one else in some way.
I see the potential author, js keep doing what your doing you got a good mc rn
the quality of writing is good so far, the story continues to seem very interesting, I just don't feel that this story will have an end, as authors almost always end up dominating these works (mainly because they don't have the story planned) I just hope that Keep going like this for at least 100 chapters and I'll be happy (yes, I don't have much hope that it will go beyond that)
Writing is pretty good but the author has one of the worst story pacing i have ever read in my life. Massive turn off!
Good fanfic just a couple of things the author should fix in my opinion. like how there is way too many chapters for one mission for example there are like 15 chapters so far for the first mission and 5 of them are just a single fight with a special jonin.
36 ch mc still weak like shit great writing but something not make sense . mc can only hide and scheme but he smart if you want strong and smart mc this isnt for you this mc only smart but weak. update are super slow .
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Has potential but need more chapter for proper review. I’ll come back when there’re at least 20 chapter
Author has written the MC well. It's an interesting read and easy to get hooked into. I just wished there was more chapters. Would definitely recommend this to people to read! I can't wait to see how this story continues, author please bless us with more chapters 😭😭
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I have been looking for fanfiction for thousands of chapters for a very long time because I love to read and I saw the tags of this fanfiction, I have great hope for it, the author, don’t give up on your job, good luck
this work is a piece of art, that what happens when someone put all of his efforts to something, Start reading already and you won't regret it. the mc strength is growing at steady pase , and his personality is so acceptable. and most importantly this work has no Cringy lines! !.
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A great one to read, I giving this 4 star instead of 5 star is because he deletes the reviews that he doesn't like👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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