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摘要
He opened his eyes to be met by a great entity after he died. He has 5 wishes, so what would they be......(My first novel, I hope it makes sense.This novel focuses on martial arts, not ninjutsu, according to the protagonist of the story.You may find some grammar problems because English is not my first language)
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寫檢討
Sasuke asks why mc is so strong. the answer is simple, mc is just a lucky and arrogant weakling and a coward who was lucky to get 5 wishes. he himself would have achieved nothing in his life. after all, he is nobody and there is no way to call him🤣
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chapters are not enough... i need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more and more.
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there are not enough chapter for me comment about the story but its still look promising. needs improvement in writing quality 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍