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摘要
I always had been a great fan of Naruto. But that's not real, right?
I can't be a shinobi right?
Well that all changed when a Random Godly being sent me to the world of Shinobi but there is a catch. This is not the Naruto I know.
For starters, there is no Hashirama here. There is no Senju here.
How will that change the world.
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I think the premise of this story is cool and i enjoyed reading it! As a comment, I think you are a great writer and i want to challenge you in a future novel to really get the creative juices flowing. What i saw in the novel was basically kishimoto’s naruto plus one AU. Not really enough change to show that this work was unique. To be clear, you made quite a few changes but you never really explored the impact of them. Haku/zabuza lived what happened to them? Naruto had a friend growing up what really changed? Sasuke had a rival growing up, what changed? Sakura went to med nin training what happened to her? How did this 5yr old kid get access to high level seal knowledge without the hokage knowing? I think if you spent more time filling in the holes and less time focusing on canon plot, it could be game changing. One way to get yourself to focus on that would be to stop writing in canon timeline, choose a different period. Could be interesting. So for the above reasons, you get a 3 star in story development , 5 for everything else since its basically kishimoto naruto
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I understand the part where he is a Fuinjutsu master and a genius but mastering them at a very young age until the part where he can even make a jutsu same as the Hyuga's foundation technique is already unreasonable due to the fact that author-san is just making the Hyuga an enemy and hello it's boring because everything is too fast. The MC is already OP in someways, there is no proper development at all. All I see is the MC desperately show off his genius brain while putting himself as the NUMBER 1 target. That needs to be squash to oblivion before another Hashirama and 4th Hokage emerges....
is this a chinese novel?I haven't read it but from the synopsis, it reminds me of Chinese novels
I don’t like romance, I like that he behaves like a Chinese mc pedophile who loves small children, I like that the story takes so long to do a time skip, I want to read it for an endless childhood, mc is weak and has no right to even think about opposition, for this you need to have the strength to suppress the entire country and only then talk about the opposition
No es malo el FF, pero no es de mi agrado, me resulta muy aburrida la línea de tiempo de Naruto, hubiese sido mejor la de Kakashi, Minato, Tsunade o inclusive Madara.
The chapters especially after the start of the Chunin exams have started to feel like its written by AI. Like when the fic describes how Team 7 was able to beat the Forest of Death round how it describes how Sasuke's Sharingan and Hinata's Byakugan helped them in the exams
I didn't expect anything special in this story, but you surprised me! I hope you will continue and not abandon this masterpiece, which will be in my library! P.S. If I wrote with errors, then I apologize, I use Google translator
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
What a suprise! How in the world did the Uchiha clan manage to destroy the Senju clan, and kill HASHIRAMA SENJU! Let's be real, eternal mangekyou Madara has no hope against Hashirama.
🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐I don't understand. kakashi hayate, there are only Hayate Gekkō and Kakashi Hatake. After this, the desire to read disappears.