/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Fujitora Template
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A man had Luckly reincarnated into Naruto as an Uchiha when he died!....Sadly he was blind.
Thankfully that doesn't matter to him as he has the Template system with Fujitora!
*This is a translation and not my own fanfic, but I'm heavily editing it and changing the story a lot. This used to be a harem, but I'm cutting all of that trash out*
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This is the third time that I'm going to try this FF, despite being disappointed, this fic has everything I like, a mature protagonist and instead of doing everything he just gives those pushes.
I'm giving this a completely unbiased 5 stars. I'm just the translator but I also heavily edit scene in the story that change the plot.
Not bad. The refreshing lack of faceslapping makes this an enjoyable read. The grammar and spelling is not that good for the first 13 chapters. Coincidentally, those are the chapters that have been translated. As of chapter 14, where according to the author the original content starts, the writing quality gets noticeably better, though it is not perfect. I'd suggest that the author takes another look at the first 13 chapters and edits them again. As it is, I am looking forward to more. 😃
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Grammmar still needs a second and third check for the story as a lot of the dialogue sounds wierd and not how regular people talk more like a bad ai describing how people talk.
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you can remove sea weakness using the system using some daily tasks by little percentage or MC has to choose between some random ability and removal of sea weakness ..,..
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decent. very decent. i like it and hope that it keeps going. wanna see how many rocks will fall from the sky in the future. all over very nice to read.
A chinese fic where author is genuinly editing the sick parts of story. till now author has removed loli romance, harem route and awkward face slapping and introduced original story and promises to do the same in future by cutting the second template out (aizen) from the story and make it original, hope for this to see it to the end