Need grammar check and as for the harem you go with mei,sambui,ino,yugito, and mabui.Although the plot line will be long because of how to get them all in a harem it it will be worth it.
I took a look at the first chapter, and the grammar is horrible. I will not be reading the rest of this story, and I more than likely will not come back to re-read it. Overall I don't recommend this to anyone literate.
Need grammar check and as for the harem you go with mei,sambui,ino,yugito, and mabui.Although the plot line will be long because of how to get them all in a harem it it will be worth it.