/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Failed Knight
摘要
A random coder met an accidental death and was reborn in the world of Naruto, receiving minor assistance from a deity. In this new life as Ikki, he traverses the world, engaging in battles against formidable foes with his minimal chakra reserves and personal kenjutsu skills.
The initial chapters might seem slow and bad since they're just setting the stage, but keep reading, as the action and adventures of Ikki will soon pick up and become more engaging.
The main character won't be overwhelmingly powerful from the beginning. In fact, he'll start with quite limited strength.
This world will diverge somewhat from the Naruto universe, as a much larger crisis looms over it, adding new dimensions and challenges to the familiar setting.
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honestly the grammar has been a major problem sticking with this novel, i like the premise and the story but at times i cant stand reading it because it feels like caveman speech. the author literally has not used "The" in nearly every chapter. if he used it the grammar would be atleast 5 times better than it is.
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nice story with light hearted comedy, i enjoyed it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
try using AI to fix the grammars/sentence so it will be easier to read, or use software like grammarly because the story are great