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just a project for me, I don't know if I can continue it if ever I'm getting busy with college so enjoy what is on it.
this is certainly going to be a harem, and the women I have had in my mind are quite extensive so there's gonna be a lot, I'm gonna try to give them as much screentime as I can, or provide them with their own stories but it's gonna be difficult considering how many are in my plans, and their not gonna be part of other anime perse but their gonna be part of a different franchise.
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寫檢討
I don't know how many people will read the story but do please enjoy what's in it, the writing won't be good, this is my first fic that I plan to continue majority of my works are bad atleast in my opinion therefore I deleted all of it.
the content of first chapter in beginning was good but after that it becomes somewhat disturbing
apologies but right now I'm quite burnt put of this book, I plan to get back to it when I get some rest, I do plan to still write and another one is on the works I just don't know when it'll release, I plan to properly write future plot points aswell; again apologies how it's gonna be on hiatus for a while.
Never in my life I wanted to kill an Author and maim them. No normal person, only a SICK deranged person can write about this stuff. Someone who wants to do all those things, and won't have the courage to. Do you want to do that, to your mother maybe? Or maybe your sister? Or maybe to your daughter or son? Or maybe you already did that to your son? You are disgusting....
First Naruto FF that can actually make Hiruzen an accurate grandfather and hokage. Writing quality is very good, updates are consistent, and I’m looking forward to the romance aspect of it (I’m a sucker for Hinata).