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Here's the revised text with the Chinese name changed to a Japanese one and the grammar checked:
**[Naruto, invincible, system, time travel, villain, fanfiction]**
Takeshi Kuroyama obtained the combat power template of "The Founding of Konoha Era Madara" and came to Konoha in the early stage of the plot to become the new ninja Shura Uchiha Madara!
“Hei Jue, this time it’s my turn to speak to you from the bottom of my heart.”
“Obito, remember, you are just a pawn!”
“Finally, I want to say...”
“Hashirama! I have reached the other side!!”
Feel free to let me know if there are any more changes you'd like!
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寫檢討作者 ooramg_samco
i thought i was reading a naruto fanfic not a broly SI who cant even hear a name .......................................................................