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Another fic about a hit in Naruto and with the Gamer system
The main character of the picture
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to think i complain how suck chinese naruto fanfic mtl is, specially the name translation.. how wrong i was, this one top it all. translation is super sucks
This is a Russian work, I would call this fan fiction "a shitty choice". first, if you're not Russian, you won't understand half the jokes (as a person from Russia, I know what I'm saying, this fan fiction is mostly humorous). + in addition, the words that are used in the "original" are "slang expressions", so you will again have a hard time understanding what it is all about! then a very mediocre and not very interesting plot.
I didn't expect to see this fic on the English site. I read the original source, I liked it very much. fic for the sake of humor and only for the sake of it. Привет из России :D
great good story 10/10 but very nerfed the mc compared to other novel cause already 300+ and still like chunin or jounin levelkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
the greatest fanfiction ever written when I finished this story I felt like a piece of me left with it the grammar isn't great but you get used to it.
This is one of the best plots that I've read in principle for all time, the characters, the scenes, the background, the narrative are top notch I wish the author good luck and inspiration
it's cool, Can I know the real name of this novel please 😌☺️😃😃😃😉 😊☺️😊😊☺️😊☺️😉 ☺️🙂😅😅😅😅😅😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🍪🍪😁🍪😁🍪🍪🍪🍪
Только не надо было сразу же после того я прав на х п ё и я не очень удобно в любое место в рейтинге критиков и я буду не на связи и хорошего вам отдыха на воде в Кишиневе не было в порядке установленном для того я поел не я это уже с утра я случайно не в Москве я случайно кинул не могу сказать только завтра с вами я прав и законных не было сразу не знаю почему не работает не корректно в Москве в конце есть вещи я могу сказать точно и я вам позвоню как тебе такой вопрос у нас не знаю что ты здесь дермо не было сразу после получения оплаты не знаю что делать дальше не очень удобно пользоваться в Москве я не могу понять как тебе такой план я могу читать и я буду на месте в военкомат но и не было бы интересно поработать в вашей
this mc is sumire or naruto?... Why the creature(sumire) already have harem?.. i like this mc, this mc definitely not idiot.. but.. my question is: why this ungrateful bastard pet have a plot when he/she is disgusting?..why you can't focus on the development story in mc?..or development in harem member?.. or development in mc power..?. i know this grammar in your fanfic is very..very terrible, but don't get me wrong at least you make this fanfic with english language [img=recommend].
Writer is regularly uploading but writing quality is a little odd, it won't motivate you to read whole ch , But I think writer will do better in the future and at least he is uploading, Keep growing 😘😇
não gostei muito monotona ..................................................................................................................
Please get a beta, the story is interesting and the premise is good so far, the problem is that the grammar makes it very hard to understand and continue reading the story.