/ Anime & Comics / Naruto (part 1) : The Second son
摘要
In a reality parallel to that of Naruto's story, the fact that Kushina is the first pregnant jinshuriki has brought consequences for her twin children who will impact the world in their own way . This story is a "what if" and I'm writing under some pretty special circumstances.
English is not my first language so bear with me, sometimes the grammar will sting but the regulars of my stories certainly already know that. I hope you enjoy reading and thank you for your time
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Would love it if you continued to write this story all the way to completion. I especially loved the changes you made to the original story and how you showed that it is the same soul reincarnating and not the part of Asura's soul which lodged itself in Hashirama and Naruto.
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Once again, the author has dropped gold on our heads. The characters are all amazing, with actual growth, and they are not just getting powered up for no reason. The plot is very organic and flows well; things aren't patchworked together for no reason. overall 12/10. if you are thinking of reading but hesitating for whatever reason, dive in. I promise it'll be worth it
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