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Naruto's Review : First Viewer is Senju Tobirama?

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作者: Nobody2NoBody

4.44 (19 評分)

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Hayashi Sora is an anime video creator, but his videos haven't been very successful.

In order to make ends meet, he decided to follow the trend and create some review videos to see how they would perform.

"Since I want to make a review, I'll start with the anime I'm most familiar with: 'Naruto'."

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Hayashi Sora thought his content would only attract a general audience. Unexpectedly, his first viewer turned out to be the Second Hokage, Senju Tobirama.

Following him, the Third Hokage Sarutobi Hiruzen, the Ninja World's Shura Uchiha Madara, and the Fifth Hokage Tsunade also became his viewers...


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This is a translation.
从给千手扉间看火影盘点开始


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19評論

4.44

  • 寫作品質
  • 更新的穩定性
  • 故事發展
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Aziz_Yaakoubi

raw please, and will the story have chapters about mc doing things other than posting review videos?

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Magu
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RAW: 从给千手扉间看火影盘点开始 (Start by giving Senju Tobirama an inventory of Naruto)

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Andy_Torres_2396

Give us the raw name, please... Or is this your fic ? I want to read more and more. I would be thankful that you gave us the raw name. Nnndndn

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OneeyedDaoist

Tell raw name 3729_;3)_4 oecbskf ejcbr8x s

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Derek_Lycan

WHAT IS THE RAW FOR THIS ONE? I CAN'T FIND IT ANYWHERE!!!

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Corbin_Penniman

okay I have to ask is this a translation? if it is not can you please fix the ground because my God I like this thick but it is killing me with how confusing it can be.

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Defective_Angel

this is really great story...! everything is good👍 when reading the 1st 2 chapter i thought this gonna be another boring journal, but with a little bit comedy everything became perfect

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Dennis_junior

long story short it's absolute trash the only reason it's not a 1star review it's coz u ùsed narutos world n u update schedule is stable apart from that TRASH

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darknightofAnime

author San please tell us the raw and this story is absolutely brilliant.

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Lord_of_Sin

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Troy34

Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better

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KazumiYamato_027

Really! This is a very interesting book, even after I read the synopsis!Please keep updating and keep up the enthusiasm! We readers are waiting for you.💪💪💪😊

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Samuel_Snow

Absolutely love this story keep up the amazing work

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DaoistRovWhC

5 out of 5 stars. This has been an enjoyable read so far, and I am very excited for more of this!!! 🎉🎉🎉

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Cross_Ryuu

it's good but very slow and is mostly world building.

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Kedfeel

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Lolipop_Android

This is one of the best fanfics I’ve read about the Naruto world. Mainly because it's a story that avoids the overused cliché of a OP Uchiha clan protagonist and, instead, gives us a main character who doesn’t even belong to the Naruto world, aside from the videos he makes. The people reacting to the Naruto world stay true to their essence, and although sometimes I feel like their reactions might not be entirely accurate for the characters, I believe it’s ultimately the interpretation of the original Chinese author. There are also things I find a bit illogical, like Tobirama showing the videos to his students after seeing the first review, but in the end, the story wouldn’t be as entertaining if those kinds of things didn’t happen. The only thing I could complain about is that the translator doesn’t seem to have much regard for others’ reading comprehension, but other than that, it’s very entertaining to read. By the way, I’ll add that I don’t usually leave reviews for stories, but it really bothered me to see that this fanfic only has a 4.4 rating when there’s plenty of garbage out there that could easily be categorized as sleep aids, with ratings they don’t deserve. Anyway, I’d like to emphasize that if anyone in the reviews section complains about the grammar or finds it a bit confusing due to the format used by Chinese authors, they have every right to complain. I think the author could have done a better job of adapting it to the language rather than just translating it. In any case, keep going with this translation, translator! I can’t stand the existence of more ninja world stories without an interesting plot twist!

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Lithiel

It is a decent idea of a story but to read it you need to just turn your brain off, and if names being correct is really important to you just don’t start reading.

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like this idea about review video/lightscreen in Konoha for each Hokage.. It can or will change their fate/destiny.. I hope with the 4 video, Danzo in the 61 years Konoha will die quickly.. And will their be video of 4th Hokage a.k.a Minato Namikaze, 5th Hokage a.k.a Tsunade, etc?? Why in the 3rd video there's no talk about destruction in Uzushio and Hiruzen don't do anything?? Love your story author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍😍

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