摘要
After an explosion in a secret factory, a mysterious biological nanobot with the ability to duplicate was released into the world.
The nanobots infected all the living beings on the planet and gave humans an evolution system.
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Its nice. Don't really know what else to say so I'm just going to ramble on about random stuff. Did you know that according to Chinese tradition, the history of silk began in the 27th century BCE. Its use was confined to China until the Silk Road opened at some point during the later half of the first millennium BCE.
I read up to 15 chapters it has a unique idea. But it have a small cliché of return to the past being overpowered than everyone. and It is a bit fastpaced overall good book,I hope the author do not dropped this book.
Writing Quality- ✧✧✧✧ It's a easy read, nothing too distracting, but could definitely improve a lot. Story Development- ✧✧✧✧✧ Although kind of fast paced, it's still an enjoyable read, and isn't even a demerit, atleast not to me. I quite like it. But others may feel differently. And the story seems to have a general direction at the very least and doesn't feel out of place. I especially like how much thought was out behind the nanomachines. Character Design- ✧✧✧✧ Although I have a general idea of his character, it isn't actually explained directly which isn't bad since I actually pay attention to the story, but a little explanation in the begining could go a long ways. Updating Stability- ✧✧✧✧✧ I haven't been around long enough to experience an update, but based on what I see, it was likely updated either weekly or every other week which is pretty good. World Background- ✧✧✧✧✧ Seems to be well thought out aswell and extremely enjoyable to read about, guessing the MC's next move. Overall ✧✧✧✧.6 (Aka 4.6 stars.) Definitely an enjoyable read, although there are a few problems everyone and then with either spelling, wrong words being used, or capitalization, it's never distracting unless you're actively looking for mistakes. Along with that, the read it self feels smooth even though the pacing is a little fast. And the way the story unfolds is nothing short of enjoyable. All in all, definitely something you want to binge if you haven't read it, and wait for it to upload once you catch up.
Nice story iam in the starting chapters but so far so good............................................................................................................
REFRESHING TO SEE A SYSTEM WHICH IS NOT OP AND MC+CO-MINOR-MC ARE NOT OVERPOWERED FROM THE START AND ACTUALLY ACT AS REACT RATIONALLY AS NORMAL PEOPLE WOULD DO!! 😊😊😊👍👍👍🍀🍀🍀💜💚💜 PLEASE AUTHOR! - KEEP WRITING YOUR STORY - AS IN KEEP WRITING THIS NOVEL PLEASE!! OR MARK IT AS DISCONTINUED
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.