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ON HIATUS
Son: Mama at the age of 15 I will finally be a man and from then, I will take some iron horses together with capable solders to adventure. I alone as a sword saint, I will conquer the forest until I reach Green Marble.
Mother: Am sure you will little love, but to achieve that you need to be diligent and study everything regarding geography, Weather, flora, fauna including little of astronomy and astrology.
Son: That I will try, but mama if you say everything, that close to impossible, because I can't see the end of the Animal section of the library.
Mother: That is a sign of given up
Son: Don't worry, I will do it!!
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The continent of DEEP as others call it, is a Mysterious continent that hold many secrets. Even the most powerful Kingdom in the continent that excels at History and discovery of the Ancient Civilization only found the tip of the iceberg. Even the must powerful warrior that utilize a Divine power will waver at some location, turn tail and ran with pride on his face that he take a glimpse at something.
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Hello there, New Author is here.
This is my first Novel. I hope to write something good, but you know I am new to this, so don't judge.
Practice makes perfect
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Well just gave the Novel Full stars, cos the premise seems interesting to me but hope you will get better not backwards, steady update, story development, design and world background should be well thoughtout and keep it interesting.
I read the author's note before proceeding to read the synopsis and the first chapters. I can say beyond doubt that the story is really captivating! and there were no traces of grammatical errors that the readers have been warned about. English is also not my second language so I can relate to the author's insecurity, but after reading the chapters, I can say that the author's fears have no basis at all. the book is a wonderful, beautiful piece of art and deserves this perfect 5 stars. I am also gifting the story as a piece of lucky charm from one author to another. best of luck in everything you write author-san!
This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With a unique take on the genre, this became standing out from the rest. This reader will recommend this to the new ones. More exposure will be a key to success. Kudos and Good luck!.....from review swap thread.
The plot and storyline is interesting. The update is okay I guess. The length of the chapter is something that is need to be improved. It is kinda slow pace which works for novels that has a mystery genre. Writing style and quality is great. All in all a great novel to read.
I really liked the indeoth description of the character snd his environment in the first chapter, it really set a scene for me. I personally struggle to imagine scenes and need help with it. The grammar could use work and you could definitely benefit running it through or writing it in grammarly before publishing it.
Extremely intriguing, the slow-paced storytelling gives a good mystery to look forward to. The conversation is intelligently set to make your mind interested and wonder. I like it and I look forward to reading more chapters.
A great story full of fantasy and adventure. best of luck to the writer and his book. Enjoyable and delightful book....... Keep up the gud work
The novel has a lot of potentials and has a steady update and also is well written. I don't think there is a problem so far so good. If this is your first time writing then my first time is a disaster but I improved tho so good luck in your writing career.
A lot of newbie Authors pop up. From everywhere but few can write a unique story as you. Hope the Quality keep improving. New Author With Great Talent. I think you deserve a good Support.
Since this is the author's first novel then I can tell he has what it take to become a fantastic author in the future. The story was well developed and unique.
An interesting novel with intriguing plot ... love the characters.. I hope this novel gets the attention and exposure it deserves. keep going author .
The style and plot are really awesome. I really love action and adventure. The characters seem realistic because the emotions the writer used are really appreciable. Keep up the good work author. Positive Vibes I got from novel. GG
Shameless Author Review I love My Novel to the point I'm bias, so I give it five stars. I am a new Author and this is my very first Novel. Cons English is not even my second language, so you should expect Grammar problems and spelling mistakes. Pls be patient I will improve gradually. Please provide your corrections, suggestions and insights in the comment section of every chapter. It will be helpful and good motivator. Productive critics are probative while abusive critic are unapproved If you like My Novel pls Like, Review, and give Power stone. Especially Power stone Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote THANK YOU