摘要
I was once a normal guy on Earth, but a Goddess summoned me to her Realm and told me that she was going to send me to a planet named Napreshan. I wonder how this is going to work out...
*Author's Note: Let me just say that this is an experiment I'm doing. I never wrote something like this. I'll try my best to write the best I can, but I can't guarantee the best results. However, I'm going to make this my masterpiece and try my best to make it one. Please be patient with me and let's go through this journey together! Also instagram is jeffreydoln and discord is https://discord.gg/g9t5MJ5*
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Hello, guys, I'm gonna spoil myself a little and help myself out. Basically, this is the first otherworld light novel I wrote. On top of that, this is also the first time, I wrote something related to a system. This may be a rough ride, but I really wish that you all would enjoy it. I want this to be my masterpiece where I can proudly say this is my light novel. Yeah, see you all later
The story is alright, so I’m really just going to complain. So it’s some basic stuff gets summoned by a goddess name Lucifer and fires some shots at the the Bible. She doesn’t provide a reason for dragging him from his home but feels bad for doing it so gives him some stupid cheat that lets him level up excessively for killing a goblin. She also provides some pretty basic classes for him. Gunman was one glad that wasn’t picked guns have no place in swords and magic worlds. But out of everything he picked the most unoriginal path of swordsman. Hell he was even given a katana which aren’t even that good so his thought process was obviously influenced by some dumb weeb ****. All in all it feels pretty stupid but someone has to like this crap so have fun.
It's it's really well made and he put a lot of work and thought into it so props man it's awesome!
Total waiste of space story. Reads like a cheap knock off Chinese story but the first chapter has samma in it but it's not a Japanese story and from there only gets worse...
I personally like the first half best(before the revamp). Main character was a little different from other similar stories. Second half is good too. Main character in second half seems very similar to other stories. Kinda tired of girl crazy boys. Hope it doesnt turn into a harem story. Would love if both could continue....maybe as two books?
The story is nice. It's a little common in terms of world, but first person stuff isn't all that common so I'll give it thumbs up for that bit of stepping up. First person point of view is hard to write since everything is based on your character's vision. You can't write about something that the demon king did 9 million miles away which is annoying at times for the author since I see so many other authors doing that in these "isekai" novels since it shows foreshadowing and things like that. Well either way, good job and I hope to see you upload more.
Just started reading this thing. I don't normally write reviews on qi especially on fanfics, hopefully the quality and the chapters gets revamped (seriously add more chapter!!) But overall it's quite good read. Thank you!😎
IN A NUT: MC who is summoned into a world of Combat Arts, Magic and Magical Beasts, recieves a System and a Helper... REVIEW: it tells a wonderful story on how a guy becomes strong in an RPG... but it still lacks anything noteworthy or anything that makes it noticeable in a crowd of our usual LitRPGs... let's hope for more and better.. THANK YOU AUTHOR!!!