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摘要
It's just an ordinary story where I am reincarnated in Kyoto and have a stepsister.
If there is something special, it's just that I have a system.
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https://www.patreón.com/akikan40
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remind me when this fic have 250 chapter since akikan40 is known for cliffhanger
The moment I saw the comment about the new chapter, I thought in my heart; here we go again.[img=strong]
Here good sir, take my five stars.... for those who don't understand... it's because he is akikan
It is a good story but the author tend to complicate the MC psychology to much and then there is too much focus on romance I would prefer if he diverted his focus on business or something else and lastly the system while I would say it is not bad it makes a lot of things meaningless it is that broken I would prefer a system that does not grant things physical things like money building or items in general. Overall, it is not a bad story the grammar is very good you rarely see mistakes and the update is very stable the story is not bad give it a try.
I have given you full star beside the story development part. I just think you something explain too much without writing the actual plot. Otherwise everything is the best! I recommend everyone to read it at least once. I bet you will love it. This is the MC.
i was wondering why i was enjoying this, turns out it was a new akikan novel LEZ GOOOOOOOOO. Prolly the only harem fanfic author I like. (Im part of no harem sect but for akikan i shall commit heresy)
What I liked most about Akikan's stories was that the characters had a personality consistent with the canon, but now they all seem like idiots who only serve to praise the protagonist. it's already boring
What can I say better than his last work, but the quality of his work has dropped a lot compared to his first stories, the protagonist became a cretin who can only think about women and interact with them, the secondary characters only speak to adore the women. man. mc as if he were christ just for buying a plate, the system is the same that turns the protagonist into a god even though the world is super calm, the chemistry and fun interactions were replaced by the protagonist, he is big and handsome . and continue with that strange habit of mentioning the mc's crotch
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No tomen en cuenta esta reseña. Padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru padoru
It’s okay novel to read in free time, not much when it comes to world background or character development and ofc like akikan novels, op MC and Pokémon harem, one of worst possible endings tho, novel ends in random moment just because I guess ? MC didn’t even get halfway to his goal that he was talking about for a long time
You should create a fanfiction more similar to this, You are really good at writing fanfiction
I just realized akikan make a new fanfic when I read the author's name................................ ................. ................. .................
I hope this will be better than the riser one _________________________________