摘要
To make your reading experience MORE FUN, I created a free comic for the novel. Check out the first chapter to read it or join my discord server :D
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It's a story about a super hero in his early footsteps, the journey to become one, and the rise to save all human kind.
The only mistake Aroon and his brothers made was to say no. They got an offer to submit and they refused.
Aroon didn’t know all this would happen next. He and his two other twins wrongly thought that the worst would be to lose some privilege... not losing their lives.
Under other circumstances you wouldn’t put him, his brothers, or even any of his family in any regard at all. He was raised knowing how hard it was to survive in this world, especially with such a big family with no father to shoulder many responsibilities for them.
However fate had another opinion regarding him.
The world is under great turmoil for five years. Dungeons came up out of nowhere and monsters kept killing people.
In this brutal and mysterious world, systems started to appear. They were only given to twins, and humanity started to strike back and defend their homeland.
Join the adventures of Aroon, who lost his two twin brothers before, lost his systems and was left as someone without anything at all... The loser Fallen as he was always called.
In a sudden twist of fate he got himself a system, the only and unique Solo System that no one else had. He can fight on his own without the help of anyone and also can level up; something wasn't available to anyone before.
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Discord server link:
https://bit.ly/ranmaro
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Release schedule: one up to two chapters per day.
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The cover photo is from the comic XD
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Tried, seriously...I dropped it when finished chapter 36 (free chapters for test ofc), see an MC who only complains, an unstable system, sometimes a system, sometimes an "tsundere" or an "old man" but more like an young....Confused interaction with people around and especially the part of unanswered questions forcing some weak mystery with MC forced to look weak to everyone around him and shoved down his throat that he must do "this" and "that", why yes and if he doesn't, he will lose everything the system "gave" him (what a joke, isn't it??) by the simple desire for "someone bigger" and a "high secret", ofc he can't know and with that we have a fickle and volatile character with volatile interactions, it was a short but frustrating read from one of so many "system slaves" in this platform... Nothing new in webnovel... Sorry for bad english hahaha
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To be honest i don't find it interesting why not stay at the first idea of having 2 siblings get powers and make them each with unique powers having friends and family make stories interesting i don't see what people find good about killing everyone to make the mc gain powers ... it sucks that there is no real thoughts put in most of the stories no wonder they all get abandoned in the end
It's been quite sometime since I read about those system leveling up the MCs as they go on clearing the monsters of the dungeon, and honestly this genre never disappoints me. Well written with good grammar and keep updating it and include some pretty awesome special events in the system sometimes..... it's just a request but please consider it I love them very much. Will be waiting for the upcoming updates
Too much tragedy. The story is starting after the death of his brothers and family. Then he finds his twin sisters are not dead. But while going to find them they will be killed before he reached there. Too much tragedy I can't take it. And then there is one all-knowing system and that will not give him any good answers, just being mysterious. Yet he found his sisters dead.
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The comic looks great! Can't wait to read this! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Sir i find i like your story and ask kindly to have said link to the comic.plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz pl plz plz plz plz plz plz I neeeeeed iiiittttttttttt
I've only read 11 chapters of this book and it's nice, but what about the web comic on webtoon need a new chapter soon.
average boook why? i dunno you figure it out exp.................................................................................................
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An overarching plot that give solo levelling vibes albeit mc has dark back story but a completely engrossing one to see how he's able to negotiate his new system after his heartache. Will be interesting to follow the progress of the mc. Goidluck author.
This book is AMAZING. The writing is incredible, vivid and full of feelings. The plot is really intriguing and enigmatic, which is good for providing thrills. The characters and their notions are understandable. Overall, wonderful work! Summed up in one word: WELL-THOUGHT 👍
A really well done story so far! The descriptions are vivid and flow well together with the main text, the characters are interesting and believable, and the storyline keeps me wanting to turn the chapter to read more. The prose is finely woven, and this is a read definitely worth checking out! Good luck and keep up the good work.
with the few chapters I have read, I have fallen in love with this novel already. I could see the story play in my head as I read. Good work author. keep it up ❤️
I love this kind of trope! No more words for me to say and it's a great novel! No issues about grammar and stuff. Keep up on writing, author! ^_^ P.S. I put this on my lib to read it later on! ^_^
This is my favorite genre, and it's written quite well too. No matter how many novels we have with system dungeons and monsters, it would not be enough. Well done. Try it. you will like it.
Well this is the tenth review. So I figured out to write it down myself. I started this series with a goal in mind, to have fun and enjoy writing it. But midway thought an idea popped up my mind; why don't I turn it into a comic? And so I've done that :D The comic is now released for free at webtoon. You can check it out if you want. I apologize for my delay in updating the past period, I was kinda busy with the comic thing. However as everything is settled then I can resume writing and publishing here with the same schedule I promised; two chapters per day. Hopefully you'll like the story :) Ranmaro