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Author Here!!! Welcome to 'MODS' MODS is all about a kid who isn't able to awaken an ability earlier like most of his mates. He is ridiculed and treated like trash by family and school. But one day, he becomes favoured by A demon lord. Thus, his adventures began. Happy reading and don't forget to support me.🌹
I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU. Thanks for reading my novel. And as a token of gratitude I read your novel.and guess what? I am jealous of you. You write so well. You write wayyyy better than me. There wasn't any long and boring info dumps unlike my novel. The MC seems genuine and well written. Still, you can never become too good . So I will give you some tips to help you :- 1. Read top novels in WebNovel (top 5) 2. Read real best selling novels like Sherlock Holmes and Harry Potter. (You can find their EPUB version online for free.) 3. Watch videos about how to show not tell. (You are already good at it still it will help you.) 4. Ask the top authors about some tips too. 5. Ask urself why isn't my novel getting the popularity I want. ( Popularity as in comments, reviews, votes etc.) 6. Write, just write. Simple. Write to ur fullest. Wrong, bad, poor, unreasonable still just write. Trial and error is the best way to learn. No one is judging you. Heck no one even knows ur real name. So, just write. And when u wrote a million words u will see that u have come a long way. Just imagine this. U will get goosebumps right? 7. Believe in urself. 8. Live ur work if u don't, then no one will. 9. I don't have anymore tips as I am also a newbie. And Also I have read ur comment where u said u wake up everyday to motivate ur self to write. I feel u bro. Life isn't easy. Just keep pushing and u will win. Ur novel is good and good things can't remain unhidden. I believe in you. U can do it. And even if ur novel didn't do well u can always write another. U r not Shakespeare, right! No one even knows ur name . So, just believe in ur self and push through. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO ALL OF YOU. [img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend]
Haven't read to the end yet, but I think the story might be interesting just from the excerpt alone. Hopefully the author updates more so I don't get to stop at a cliffhanger, Hehe.
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Dame, just dame, shame this is not a manga or a webtoon. The story is amazing, the character is amazing and I read all 18 chapters in a single. Its worth not sleeping.
Overall, the book is great and somewhat interesting........the grammar is okay but if you can improve it, it'll be great.... the characters are quite awesome and I like Zheren more ( lol) I hope to see more of him in the future.
Nice book.................... don't drop it, please continue it..................!!!!. It's got some potential and also it is recommendable...
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Nice book!!!!!! It is worth a read...................... I hope you don't drop it, keep writing, please.................... I'll be around to support the book.
I think the book is intriguing..but it's slow-paced. It's good tho, at least, the MC needs some time to get his ability and powers before finally becoming a demon lord. Nice Book...just don't drop it.
Nice book author, the plot is nice and the pace is slow. But Max is dumb, I don't know why.... I just hope you can make him a little wise........
A great book from the start. I like Max's personality so far and I hope that when he becomes a demon lord, he would not stop his funny word usage. The book is interesting and would recommend it to those who love slow-paced demon lord's books.
As expected from you, this book is top-notch. And slow-paced as well, there are not too many info dumps that make the book look terrible to the readers. AUTHOR, your book is great and wish you the best of look in your wrotibg.
First of all, I want to say thanks for your efforts in making this book great. You surpassed my expectations for it and I am very happy. I love this book after A demon lord's rebirth... you dropped it but I hope you don't drop this one. The characters are cool especially Zheren, I like him. and wish to see more of him. As for Max, well, he is great too and I love how he isn't a blood-seeking MC or someone who wants to avenge at all cost. It's a nice book and please continue.
It's a nice book and also interesting.....the book so far is great but it'll be better if you improve your writing quality. I still recommend it though to readers who wanna give it a try.
An interesting book I must say, it is Slow-paced with simple grammar that can be understandable. There is not too much info dump like some other books which I find boring. I just hope Max gets an ability quick before the duel between him and Nat. How about Harem? will there be a harem? You know as a demon Lord, he'll need a harem of ladies to make it more interesting
I like the chapters so far, it is quite interesting and I like how slow-paced it is. The MC is yet to make friends I can't wait for his main adventures to begin. Great work author! I hope you don't drop the book again.
Recommendable.....I recommend this book to those who are interested. It's very great, and I see the author's laid down efforts...............Max isn't like other MCs who are overly dumb. lol, I can't wait to see what he has to show to us.
Much more better than I expected 😁😁😍 Kudos author.......... Keep writing more and don't stop, I'll be around to support you..............
Honestly, men, I won't come here to sweet talk the author or what. I'm here, in all honesty, to say that this book surpassed my POV on the author. This book is the best written by the author, I noticed you had a re-write and trust me this is the best! it's more interesting than the previous one. This new MC is better than the other one. The plot is great! The author updates two chaps every day but I wish the chapters can come in threes. This is a must read!!! I am ready to follow the author in this book till the end. :-D