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摘要
William Hunter was a young high-school student who was always at the top, in academics, looks, and athleticism.
Suddenly, one day, everyone was given a system and transported into a parallel apocalyptic world filled with powerful hordes of zombies, wreaking havoc on everyone and everything. Even with systems, most people struggle to survive.
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[You have received the ???-rank system, Minion Controller]
[You have received 1x Woodcutter Minion and 1x Warrior Minion]
[You can buy more minions in the Shop]
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What was this?
[Your Woodcutter Minion has collected 21 wood, it is now level-2]
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As other people struggled to survive. William would be able to create an army of minions and take over this hellscape.
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Review This concept of a minion system is really fresh and the progression of this system isn't too fast or too slow. It's the perfect pace to be satisfying yet not overwhelming. One of my favourite aspect of the novel so far are the vivid character backstories, instead of just having the character say their past, the author shows their past in a flashback which is really cool. It is a really engaging novel and the grammar is basically perfect with hardly any errors. If you're looking for something new to read this is it!
From what I’ve seen thus far, this is great. The story is different from the usual I have read. I absolute enjoyed the first five chapters and can’t wait for more. Hoping this isn’t dropped is my wish. There are so many questions, yet not enough answers. Only by reading will I find them, anyways, this is an absolute yes.
interesting novel, with slow pace, fleshing to see an mc who is not op, but with all good things comes bad things, the mc is personality is pretty bland, he is not completely cold blooded but he is cold in a way, he doesn't seem to have personal feelings what so ever, he is mostly calculating situation almost like a machine and human hybrid, he is bullied but he doesn't seem to feel any anger nor care which is weird, the mc has no magic, just minions, but in the world he is in there are people who can avoid death, tho he has enchanted things but he personally isn't that strong without sacrificing his memories further more turning into emotionless pupet. though it is a little boring I'm gonna keep reading cause why not,finish what I have started.
I stopped at chapter 64. Just after a long Author’s Note stating a massive change to the story. Again. I must have joined late enough that other changes were minimally invasive, but an entire character (as far as I have read) just disappeared with no explanation. Decided to stop before paying because of the drastic change(s). It may not bother others. Just threw me off to much. Not a bad read over all.
Have read till chapter 20 and Its pretty boring. Mc is dead inside and gathering Wood by hitting it with hand, looks like we are in minecraft :)
It is well writen. but if you expect an overpowered mc with a op system (from the tags and title) you might be dissapointed. not many other characters systems have been introduced so far (40 chapters in) but for a majority I have thought "I would probably prefer if this was the mcs system". It is rather slow paced so he might be op in another 100 chapters, I don't know. But a lot of other humans are seemingly more op than him (he is currently ranked 20th-30th on the global leaderboard). to me that goes against the definition of OP.
So far I really love the book and the main character. The only critique I have is the main characters and the minions level ups. The MC’s level ups seam a bit force like when they happen I would prefer them to happen mid doing something. And he look at it later rather than like when he wakes up or something. But I can live with it. Overall a really good book I really hope it can make it to well over a thousand chapters.
honestly I haven't read it, sounds cool, I just love the use of minions, reminds me of the games overlord, here hoping for a remaster in ps5
oke interested...noted..... I just add dis in my library I will comeback after dis novel reach 100+ chapters .............. Thank you!!
At 25 chapters I would say that this is a good novel. Pros: Cool/Intetesting system Interesting system for all characters Cons: Somewhat cringe dialogue Characters not fully developed and feel hollow Not the best use of the system imo Personally not ruthless enough and like I said I feel like he’s not using the system to it’s fullest ability While I stated a lot if cons, I like the direction that the story is going in and have no big problems with the storyline and the cons are all minor things. I would recommend.
ill come back to read when it has 30 ch but ill leave this here to show support ms,skskskskkskskskskkskskskskskskskkskskskkskskskkskskskksks
Author how many chapters are you going to do about chole like common man are you going back to the main story or what anyway this novel is on of the best I've read good job and I hope you keep going
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The story is good and fresh. Much better than other apocalypse or system novels. The only small issues I have are: Every character is shown as aloof, cold, emotionless. Such themes are repeated too many times in the story. Also, mc shouldn't have gone in the raid on vampire proginator, which is going on currently from ch 160+. He should have leveled up more. But it's a small issue.
The writing quality is great not many problems with grammar and the likes, but the storyline is a bit erratic and don’t have a good build up at the beginning. Imo the first 50 chapters are the foundation of a story, and should be where the reader decides to stay or drop the novel. I myself probably won’t finish the novel as I dislike any holes in the story, especially at the beginning and skipping time without at least a summary of what happened in the next couple chapters. Not trying to say the author is bad or anything, for a novice it’s pretty good, but I’ve read many of these different world/kingdom building novels so this one failed to keep my interest. Give it a read though, and support the author as they could be a hidden gem that just needs a polish, as we all need more good stories. Keep up the good work!
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As much as I wanted to enjoy this story, the entire thing just seamed like a slog to get through with me having to skimm 30 percent of it. The positive aspects is the anti-hero mc who will do anything to progress, decent Grammer, and an interesting power system.The negatives is a mc without any purpose or real personality, A lack of any characters with purpose, and the fact that very few important plotpoints are expanded upon or have any lasting effect.
It's pretty dang good. I highly recommend it! (I would give it my sticker of approval but maybe I'll just hold off on it...) *********************
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