/ Fantasy / My Navy Seal: She causes him to lose control
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...You turn and see a man like no other, his black hair falls perfectly in place and his piercing blue eyes meet yours. Every muscle in his body sings in perfect harmony as he moves.
...He gives you a cocky smile and slowly removes his shirt. You knew that the man before you was well built but this is a ridiculously, breath-stealing, indefinable masterpiece sitting in front of you. You're trying to regain some sort of respectability around him but you can't control the flush shifting inside the very foundation of your being. You swallow visibly. He sees your blush shining like a beacon for all to see. His cocky smile returns on his face and he knows what he's doing to you...
....You open the door and the smell of the ocean fills your senses. You feel the wind through your hair and the unmistakable stickiness that comes with the sea air. You walk on the deck to the side of the ship. The moonlight is playing on the dark ocean in front of you. It's a warm summer night. You hear the waves crashing against the ship. You take a deep breath of the fresh ocean air.
You stare at the ocean and an unfamiliar calmness comes over you. You feel for the first time that you have to be here, that this is where you belong. You've always wondered if you made the right choice and this feeling right here confirms what you've been thinking all this time. This is your home now....
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Hi Readers!! Hope you're enjoying the book so far. I thought I'll introduce some of the characters for you. Please meet Master Chief Nick Roberts. Love ya and enjoy!
Love, Love, Love this story as well. I started reading it over in Chapters but have followed you over here. Keep up the great stories... Cant wait for more updates. Stay safe!!
I'm absolutely love this story! I started it in Chapters and am now rereading it and I can't wait for more! I need them to get together already 😂
Wow. I feel like I was right there. The connection with Kim and Nick is So strong. I can't wait to see The way this story continues. Well done
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I ansolutely love this story! It had me hooked right away! Love the storyline & characters! The author/writer is amazingly talented! Started reading this on chapters followed here! Definitely tecommend reading her books!
i so love this book. i really hate to think that the other dr is cheating on such a good man. an i hope that doc can let her longtime boyfriend at home know what's going on.
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I am so please with the development of this book I definitely recommend it to mY friendsand I am so excited for the next chapter. If this book wasn’t free I would pay for it.
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This book is hands down one of the best military romances I've had the pleasure of reading. Initially found it on Chapters and couldn't put it down. Hoping you decide to publish on paper. Definitely going to reread. [img=recommend]
I love the way it's first person to help the mind explore the experience of the storyline and the view of the two makes it seem more larger than it is but the same time you get more information that makes you keep Reading
I absolutely love this book, and can't wait to read My Navy Seal Two!!!! You did a great job in book one with the characters and the story. You can count on me to be a loyal reader. Keep up the good work and God bless.
I really loved this story... and I'm already following the next story My Navy Seal II. I started reading it in chapters and followed the writer here to this app. The story is so captivating, has suspense, action, romance, betrayal and some erotic parts. Congratulations on writing such and awesome stuff 😍😍👏👏👏
It has been a while since I’ve truly read a good book and this book has it all. It has adventure, romance and suspense. It is also well written.
this is a great book. it shows people what it is like to find the true love of your life. I have cried and laughed while reading this book. I would recommend this book to anybody who loves a good romance.
Hi Readers!! Hope you're enjoying the book so far. I thought I'll introduce some of the characters for you. Please meet Dr. Kim McPherson. Love ya and enjoy! [img=recommend]