摘要
"Master, I'm sorry... It's all my fault that you could not break through before your last moments."
"Don't worry, my disciple. I will not die," said Xu Fan as he smiled at his disciple, whose face was covered with tears.
“If only… If only I could get you a few more Foundation Establishment Pills..." The genius of the sect knelt on the floor while crying like a baby.
Xu Fan looked at his oldest disciple and sighed. He then took out a Foundation Establishment Pill and nonchalantly threw it into his mouth.
The next second, divine lights of five different colors filled the world.
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It's not bad just not for me. This MC is too much of a Gary Stu. Not only that but it's also pretty boring and it feels like his lowkey modo is bound to fail because he just saves people when they're in danger and that puts him at risk. Not only that but he seems too attached to "Friends" who seem to just be taking advantage of him. I really just don't like the mc his kind approachable nature seems to contradict his lowkey goals and I'm not a fan.
It isn't bad, I originally only planned on reading this for five minutes to get the voucher, but now i already reached chapter 38, the story so far has been pretty well written, but i'd have to read further to have a gauge on world building and other aspects, as for story development, so far i felt that there isn't a coherent overarching story line besides main character earning enough money to further advance his relic crafting skills.
I have only read around 30 chapters and from that, all I can say is that MC is a pushover, and the story is the same as many novels that have immortal MCs nothing new or unique.
Looking forward to seeing where this story will lead, keep up the good work so far 👍
Why do I feel like I already read this??? Like i’m getting “dejavu” and know what will happen and what will he do…. So weird…
This is from a reader who has read the MTL translation, gave up, and found this translation... it's exactly the same, maybe they rename a few things, but the translation quality is not good. names are often swapped, and sometimes a character's name goes from it's actual translation to it's Chinese version... it's just not good. Plus, the story isn't the best either, mc goes through it extremely slow, and the title is misleading. the title instead should be "My Master Only Levels Up when he is dying from old age"
good novel 👍🏼. once in a while, the recommended novel for free pass is a gem and this novel is one such novel. it's good and stable but quite slow paced. it also focus more on slice of xianxia life instead of pack full of adventures. i like it but maybe it's not someone else cup of tea.
good story and decent translation in the early chapters but after that it gets confusing. Still a fun read, especially early on. Tho later wrong chapters from other books start appearing, then gender is inconsistent and names as well.
The story for the first few chapters is somewhat good and generally I think that it would be a good read, but I’m dropping cause from the comments about female characters I already know it’s gonna have harem
mc is really a pushover. at the start I thought , ok it's a one time thing it will getting better in the future but NO it's still the same . if u like it I don't mind but why author are u making him do this it's like forced it's not in it's personality
Good novel that have interesting sect building plot, good world building and doesn’t follow the common stupid, lecherous and psychopath MC plot.
Great story. Please check out my book of the same genre "Odyssey In The Shadow Realm".
Entertaining read that doesn’t follow the common tropes of a cowardly protagonist much
Enjoyable cultivation novel that doesn’t go overboard with the cowardly mc trope which I appreciate.
finally finished this, it's Not a bad story, but could have been better and lengthier. I most certainly didn't like the way it ended, although I did enjoy the 1576 chapters available in raws.
Not bad, I'm glad I can read it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Better translated than the trail vote pool version from a few years ago that had heaps of votes but didn't get translated and been side line since then. Thanks for the chapters so far looking forward to reading more 👍