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"Why? Why you do this to me?" Yu yan cried.
"I'm sorry sister...... I don't mean to hurt you" Yu ting said.
"Leave!"
"Sorry" yu ting immediately leave after.
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'Why do you betray me? Am I that unworthy? My first love was lie? His love for me was illusion? How can they expect for forgiveness? How?' Yu Yun crazy cried.
She felt like someone was stab her back with sharp knife. She felt it was useless to continue her life.
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Upon reading the synopsis of the story, it caught my interest. So I add it to my library and open it. I started reading at once and I love it. Thanks to the author for creating this story. It is good.
The story is good. Well created and characters were awesome. The twist of the story seems like normal family that comes a long with some trouble. I like reading this story but i need more chapter to release please...
It's an author here! This is my second novel and I'm still trying to improve my writing skills, but I promise you that you won't be bored. I hope you can give me some nice review and tips. Thanks again for your support and time.
Try this! it is quite interesting story,the plot the context seems really wonderful easy to captured the heart of readers but please dont make such twist author.....
Nice novel just dont make twist change charac ters and etc etc... Dont push your readers to get tired....making twist and etc sometimes it driven the readers to stop and not to support your novel....although from the previous chapters are really interesting so continue author....so lets wait and see on how you make us happy and become loyal to support you....good luck
I am looking forward for more chapter. The introduction is too well and hope the story will be also very good. Author I will be waiting for interesting drama
It's too emotional story of a girl who was badly hurted mentally by his lover. I can't wait to read full novel as it is full of suspense in first chapter....... 😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😮😮😮😮😮😥😥😥😥😥😥