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摘要
Rai is now back on Earth. As an Omnipotent being, it get boring sometime especially now when his wives is out exploring Earth and having some 'girls time' without him.
To get some entertainment, Rai decide to send some poor soul to anther world. That lucky person is Ken Lee, a Neet and an orphan.
I don't own Dragon Ball or any series related to it. I made this for fun and entertainment only.
I also don't own the picture. I found it on deviantart.com by a guy name Akaggi and modify it a bit.
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This was a slightly below-average wish-fulfillment fic. While its core idea was okay, there were a lot of plot holes where the author seemed to forget that the MC had abilities that he got before he was born. There was also no real struggle since the MC basically had infinite system points which he could use to power up. Long story short, would be better if the MC was less of a Gary-Stu.
I bloody love this novel nough said.......................................................................................................................................................
finally a good fanfic with an actual ending.................................................................................................................................................
NTRed my man Gohan and ruined the perfect DBZ couple. Kill yourself author NTRed my man Gohan and ruined the perfect DBZ couple. Kill yourself author NTRed my man Gohan and ruined the perfect DBZ couple. Kill yourself author NTRed my man Gohan and ruined the perfect DBZ couple. Kill yourself author NTRed my man Gohan and ruined the perfect DBZ couple. Kill yourself author
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its a pretty good start... and the story have some originality all dragon ball fan-fic always go with either a Saiyan survivor or getting goku's body so getting cell's is a pretty good idea and about the chapters it updates daily so that's a good point not perfect like other novels where its more than 1 daily but 1 chapter per day is pretty much okay too I just wish it to continue like this and not turn out like other fanfic that was either dropped or on hiatus(but forgotten by the author already) this may even be better than the strongest legend of dragon ball fan-fic just needed more chapters... I read that fan-fic which is already finished in raws and it was good and I think this one can be better so please keep up the good work or maybe make it even better, something like more updates, so please finish this work before you go plan to make novels for a chain story that's all thank you for the chapters
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This novel is 👌. Better than most other I read on this site. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 I don't like this having to type more than 140 character thing that webnovel have.
I like it. Keep up the good work. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
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Nice story so far. I hope it doesn't get side track or worst abandon like most other novel on this site. **********************************************************************
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back for round 2 of reading this novel if that says anything about this being a good read then 👍
Bue 4.7 es una exageración muy grande para esta novela y las demás opiniones parecen b ots poniendo estrellas o repitiendo palabras ( creo que son bots para llamar la atención ) ( con el tema de los bots es fácil pedir algunos ni tienen que pagar solo hacer un favor a otro autor o grupo )
more, author! there's already new arc in dragonball super manga 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Don't mind me, I'm just shamelessly giving myself 5 star. Enjoy the read. -------------------------------------------------------------------