摘要
For centuries, portals have appeared across the world, linking Earth to the treacherous domain of dungeons. Monsters pour forth, threatening humanity’s existence. To combat them, individuals known as Hunters awaken special abilities, allowing them to enter dungeons, slay beasts, and grow stronger.
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(Disclaimer: I don't use ai for editing or making the story, this is my third novel, so that is why it will be a little bit perfect)
Parents Strongly Cautioned
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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no world background, nada character design. can't make the head or tail of the action scenes.... [img=Speechless] could have been better..... it's like 70% of the story is still inside the author's head, he's just giving us scraps like a young master syndrome
Another shameless author review, it is normal to review my own story 5 star (because it my novel so it is perfect perfect in my eyes), just take this as a Q/A section, enjoy your reading!