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Yami Iwatani, a bitter man reborn after death into the My Hero Academia universe, finds himself living as the son of Angela, a gorgeous retired hero trapped in a toxic marriage.
Gifted with a Harem System and a mysterious, dormant quirk, Yami vows to rise above his circumstances.
Navigating a childhood overshadowed by his father’s cruelty and his mother’s blind loyalty, Yami secretly trains his young body, fueled by anger, ambition and the desire to fuck and impregnate as many women as humanly possible.
When his quirk violently awakens, Yami takes his first step toward power, determined to reshape the world, break free from societal chains, and claim the life he’s owed.
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the story is good actually everything is good expect his fucking quirk its the edgies fucking quirk ive seen this far... its like the bloodline in naruto where you control your bones but the wallmart version here he get all the damage from controlling his own bones cause if you etc take your rib bone and want to use it as a spear then he have to push it thru the flesh and all the stuff inside the body so it gets bloody and and his body get mutilated after every use ... honestly its so edgy i feelt like it should be the perfect quirk for one of those dudes or girls who sit under a shady tree cutting themself while listening to sad songs ... i srsly hope author fixes the fucking quirk its so lame and not because he control bones but because he got mutilated because of it while he is standing there looking nonchalant , me personally wont be coming back until the chapters been piled up , the edgy quirk he got made me kinda off on the story xD
Que gran historia autor 🍷🗿 sigue así , no puedo esperar para leer el próximo capítulo ....,.......................................................................................
As of now, after 25 chapters: Traditional Author review! Hi everyone! Welcome to my first ever My Hero Academia fanfic (actually, my first fanfic ever). Since English isn’t my first language, I apologize in advance for any mistakes. So now, about the protagonist: Yami Yami is a very grey person. He’s not a full-blown villain, but he doesn’t blindly follow justice. He’s got his own set of morals and lines he won’t cross, like no killing without reason (for the most part) or rape. That said, he’s not a goody-two-shoes. Yami will fight, kill, or do whatever it takes to win—as long as no one (who matters) gets killed in the way. About the Harem I want the romance in this story to feel natural. Sure, it’s a harem system, but there’s no hypnosis or shortcuts. Yami has to work hard to charm each girl and make them happy(fuck them silly). My Writing Skills I’m still learning, especially when it comes to writing fight scenes or smut (or writing in general). I really appreciate any feedback! If you have criticism, don’t hold back—just let me know why so I can improve. Thank you so much for reading!