摘要
A 35-year-old gamer, dissatisfied with his life, suddenly finds himself transmigrated into a 18-year-old boy's body in a cultivation world and receives a system.
In a new body and a new world, he decides to live his life to the fullest. However, are the things as simple as they seemed?
Join Arthur's journey to find out.
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Tags: Action| Adventure| Mystery| Romance| Superpowers| R-18| Harem| Smut| Overpowered (Not from the start)| Sliceoflife| System| Transmigration| Dark| Revenge|
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This novel has a huge potential. Here, an Indian MC can travel between his real world and cultivation novel. I am looking forward to the future story development and character growth of MC, heroines and other characters. I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
The low rating is mostly beccause of two points. I don't like the MC personality (if it improves I'll change the rating) and second, when you talked about changing bodies, you wrote that it's up to him when he wants to change and for how much time. Because both bodies need to eat and drink, this sentence makes it look like time paused when he isn't in that body or that there is some kind of time difference. (A day as 24h and normaly you sleep for 8h so, if he spends 16h (24-8=16) in one body, the other will be sleeping for 16h.
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Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This is a novel about MC who transmigrated into Game World and also can log out anytime once per day.. Game World is using the cultivation method to grow stronger.. MC transmigrated as a trash young master of third wife who unable to cultivate where the real young master is dead, kill by someone within Dragonheart family.. And as he transmigrated, he got his golden finger, the System.. His father is a patriarch of Dragonheart family.. There are Grade 1-9 power ranks, and the Dragonheart family is a Grade 8 powerhouse.. The cultivation is begin from Skin Tempering Realm (Lowest), Bone Tempering Realm, Marrow Cleansing Realm, Tendon Transformation Realm, Blood Infusing Realm and Sky Realm.. In MC original world, he is the son of rich Cooperation in India but due to lack any talent, not good in many thing like sport or study, causing his father to throw him out from his father house at the age of 25 years old.. MC who is 35 years old now is living alone with no family, girlfriend, or friend.. On earth, MC is Indian, his neighbour is Indian and many other Indian names.. Most Indian authors usually use English names but not here.. MC NTR with his neighbors too.. It is annoying when the author spends 5 chapters (Ch11-Ch15) on this "chatting or intimacy" with his neighbours.. The story just starts, and you are already wasting chapters on something boring.. Ch1-Ch9 already has a good development, but later, those chapters have ruined everything.. Plus, Ch16-26 is the story where MC is doing a mission on earth (mission given basically is just to improve his body condition), and he learns that there are martial artists in the real world too.. The last time I watched Bollywood was during Shahrukh Khan, Salman Khan, and Amer Khan era.. When the author introduced this novel is Indian MC, the vibe of this novel and my perspective kinda change.. I started to read this novel in Indian slang in my head unconsciously.. So, the author wasted the free chapters with boring slice of life of Indian guys in the real world (Ch10-Ch25).. I lost interest right away.. Plus, this novel has the worst update stability ever.. I saw that he once stopped updating the novel for 3 months.. Even when he is not, he only updates 5 chapters PER MONTH (average).. Plus, this novel is just in early stage.. Ch38 is the latest chapters, but don't forget that this novel is already 8 months old.. The author writes one novel chapter as if he is a manga artist, one chapter per week.. So, in my opinion, I better avoid this type of author..