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摘要
A boy who lost his love for Formula racing after his father died on track, bringing calamity to his family. Left to care for his mother and sister, Luca does all he can to make ends meet. But it seems that every step he takes keeps pulling him back to the asphalt, and one sudden endeavor changes his life completely.
[SYSTEM INITIALIZING......]
[SYSTEM MERGING COMPLETE!]
[Congratulations, you have attained the Formula 1 System]
Luca rekindles his love for Formula racing as he strives to find his footing in this world. Rivalries and conspiracies may try to weigh him down, but Luca is determined to emerge victorious.
[THE FORMULA 1 SYSTEM, A SYSTEM THAT WILL HELP HOST BECOME THE BEST RACER IN THE WORLD]
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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction and is not affiliated with the Formula One group. No real teams or drivers are mentioned, except for engine providers.
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If you can get past the dumb points of this novel then your golden. 1: How is his family broke when they should be rolling in money? 2: why are his so called friends making fun of him for working at a racetrack? I don’t really get what’s so funny it’s just another cliche with no reason to it and why’s he embarrassed to work there? Makes no sense. 3: his sister is just dumb get rid of her. 4: he works as a marshal for one day and gets hit by a car? Okay.
The story has potential, though the author obviously has barely any knowledge on formula racing. First of all, how is he racing without an FIA license. Second is he's basically a pushover. Then he goes breaking laws of physics with magical overtakes against vehicles almost twice as fast as his s*itbox. The list goes on and on with inconsistencies.
Honestly I really do enjoy this book. I’m currently on chapter 23 and the pacing is steady, allowing for development as well as seeing Luca (our Mac) show out when he can. The system doesn’t make him op like in most novels just allowing him to develop at a slightly quicker pace, Luca himself is a layered mc, needing to grow up young but still showing his age at moments. There are some writing mistakes here and there but all in all I’d recommend this book to whoever likes the sports genre.
it has everything but it is slow in start for like 10 ch. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
am giving 4stars for the story development because the family issue has not been explained asides from this the book is perfection
Great Novel, I love it. If anyone wants to check an F1 System novel as well, Feel Free to check mine out. It’s Called, Racing Rewind: My Formula 1 System
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A very good novel with interesting story. very good writing quality and i Hope WE get more chapters. keep up the good work author. 👏👏👏
Nice read. Just a little more polishing needed here and there for it to be a better read.Good job mate, keep it up.
not bad, sadly there are no connections nor mentions of irl formula stuff f1 and others… but love the characters and curious to see next.
Set in the early 20s, this is a core system novel I first published for a contest but later dropped out of. Here it is still. #urban #sliceoflife #singleFL #system. Enjoy Luca's story as he navigates the surprisingly tense world of motorsport, striving to take his engine's performance from B-level to S-level. Let's read.