摘要
Oliver was a normal 21-year-old college student, studying hard enough to get good grades while having fun with his friends after classes.
But one day Oliver's ordinary life changed. On the way home, Oliver saw something that made his heart race.
As he passed through a dark street, he saw a man in a black overcoat disappear.
Confused, Oliver felt his eyes hurt badly as blood leaked and a message popped into his mind.
[The "Teleport" skill has been copied.]
From that day forward, Oliver embarked on a supernatural journey that changed his worldview.
Because of an accident, the greatest mage of all time emerged.
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The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
I saw the author saying "No Harem", so its a 5 for me B) I saw the author saying "No Harem", so its a 5 for me B) I saw the author saying "No Harem", so its a 5 for me B)
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
The overall story is good but please hurry and make more chapters it’s starting off good but make more chapters
Sigue con el buen trabajo ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
I have read others novels from this author and liked a lot so I have some expectations for this one, for what I read so far it's promising .........................................................................................................................................
The book is pretty good, it has a lot of breathing room in the direction the book can be guided. It's also quite cool to discover that Nunu and Zhanye were siblings. Best of luck I'll continue to read as you continue to update
I was surprised, I couldn't find any point to criticize in this story, the rhythm is good, perfect grammar, the author knows how to express well what is happening in the scene, besides always making me want to read more. POST MORE CHAPTERS FASTER
looks pretty promising I will let u know more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🍰👍👍🍰👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Helping to develop the world of this story was very rewarding. Knowing that the author is trying to get away from the clichés a lot and develop something original made me very excited for what may come in the future, for now I'm very satisfied with the development and the characters!