摘要
Cross is a laborer and helper working in multiple construction sites and stores to pay his bills and food. The pay isn’t much, but he is content with his life. He has a job, a crappy rented apartment, and a girlfriend.
But it all shatters when the world changes one day. A strange phenomenon teleports everyone into a world of fantasy, magic, dangerous beasts, and mystifying creatures.
Everyone is given abilities, skills, and spells and can level up like in a game.
And that’s not all. They are transported in a medieval timeline where technology is nonexistent, and living is harsher than one might expect!
When Cross swipes his hand, a screen appears, and the first thing he read.
‖ E V I L S Y S T E M
S I D E Q U E S T ‖
* Insult Someone
Reward:
+100 EXP
* Spank a girl’s butt
Reward:
+1,000 EXP
‖ E N D ‖
‖ E V I L S Y S T E M
M A I N Q U E S T ‖
* Brake up with your girlfriend
Rewards:
+10,000 EXP
Egg (?)
‖ E N D ‖
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This story is not like any MMORPG games. Besides the usual Kingdom Wars, quests, and guild wars, there world be 'WORLD CATASTROPHE' events. In short apocalyptic event that the MC and the others must overcome through KINGDOM BUILDING and soon.
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Just let the evil mc take over just cant bear to read the wimpy mc either merge them or just kill off the wimpy one ............................
hello author 👋 when you said after chapter 20 he will be evil and it was true and it is so cool and I love it and also please make more because I really love it and some of us loved it too so please make more and don't over work your self and thank you
So inconsistent. The author keeps on contradicting themselves with their own words and many things make no sense. I kept on reading it because I thought 'At least this isn't as inconsistent as The Flash,' but then it became as inconsistent as The Flash. For example, why does the MC not do anything at all to help defeat the monsters when he's so overpowered and nice? And the Evil Heart has a duration that has to end before it gets reactivated, yet the author insists that the duration will never end?
This is a good novel with a great plot. Although the MC is winey at the start after chapter 20 he turns cold. all in all great novel so far. Hope author doesn't ruin it by adding a harem as they just slow the plot down and are badly written
A few bits of information if you even want to proceed with reading this novel : (-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book (+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum (*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events (*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad ====••===••===••===••===••===••==== Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horrible Updating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read [Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going out World Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential ================================ Tips for the author : - It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read - Fix typos - Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it
well hard to note this book cause you have two story. One with the dumb/should die mc that except for taking our money doesn't serve anything. I just skip all his parts. then you have the story with the real mc, that embrace the world. 0 stars for the parts with the thing that serve as the "good" more like retard but well, and 4stars for the part with the other one.
Hey author why did you make the mc so naive and idiot in chapters 80 - 90. It makes me way too angry to read the next chapters
Okay so the novel has a lot of potential. However, the mc is naive, weak and stupid as well as a pushover and when the host introduced his evil persona I thought the story would turn around but the it’s only temporary and after that it becomes really hard to read the chapters of the beta mc, I literally skimmed through the 90s cause the mc is over the level of idiocity. I see a little bit of character improvement but it’s too slow. I would suggest either merging the 2 or letting his evil self take over due to a trauma or something. Overall if it wasn’t for the free event on this novel I would have stopped reading after the beta mc returned from the trip to roselake town
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PLEASE K*LL THE WIMPY GUY HE IS REALLY ANNOYING. THE EVIL HEART IS THE BEST. PLEASE MERGE OR K*LL THE WIMPY GUY. THERE IS NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IN HIM
I like the novel, something that bothers me is the mc's personality but I think it will change with the passing of the chapters, I just hope it doesn't take too long.
sorry will definitely be a really good story but the mc is the first 7 chapters all the time just crying. I just can't read any more. The mc upsets me too much.
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Haven't read it yet but I will now, I just want to say this here.... MC's background is similar to mine except the last 2...... 1. I don't live in an apartment, but my dad's house (May he rest in peace) And 2. I haven't had a girlfriend since I was 24 (I'm going 34)
The main characters personality is absolutely unbearable. He gets taken advantage of consistently and for extended periods of time I have to drop it. The late 80s to early 90s chapters are what did it for me.
Great book but i don't like the wimp character i know you are trying to develop its character but for me it hinders the story from becoming more interesting after a few chaps with him i just skipped rest of his chapter it was that bad so please do something about that and please keep updating it regularly love this novel
Great plot. Start will be very slow because the author is introducing all the plot elements and the wimpy character side is very annoying but trust me it gets better within some time. Give it a try and you won't be disappointed.