摘要
If you could gain power, wealth, or prestige, but at the price of your soul, would you accept the deal?
Humanity continues on to day-to-day life, oblivious of the supernatural creatures that lurk in the dark.
Being attacked by one of these creatures, Jayce Price was given a choice, sell his soul or die as a human, picking one of the options, multiple messages appeared in front of him.
[ You have acquired the System ]
[ Current Demonic Synchronization 0.00% ]
[ Increasing Demonic Synchronization ]
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Author here,
As this is my first ever novel I would appreciate constructive criticism to help improve the quality of the novel. Hoping to improve the quality as I write more so please feel free to state your opinions on the matter. It would be most appreciated if you could support my novel in any way you can, every contribution toward a goal is valuable, regardless of how small it may be.
Also, special thanks to J.G. for the artwork!
Contact me through Discord or Email for any questions:
Ribblood#3222
Ribblood2@gmail.com
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THIS IS GOOD. There is so much potential here, Good grammar, unique plot, very nice development. The way things are progressing is smooth and easy to understand. Female leads also have a personality.(which is quite uncommon for this time of novel). Little tragedy in the beggining but i don’t think there will be more. Check this novel out and you won’t regret it.
This is pretty good, nothing crazy and you can tell some of dialogue is inspired by anime or something but it's not to the point where it's annoying to read. A lot of common tropes but they're done reasonably well.
This is a great novel so far I’m slowly getting more and more addicted to it.
Loving this novel already! Keep up the good writing author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!