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My Best Friend Is A Transmigrator Moved

Fantasy 26 章節 55.5K 流覽
作者: Springs_Halo

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Springs_Halo

Hello, author here… If you’re reading this then I do hope you check the book out.. What to expect from the story. 1. This is my first time writi something like this, and I’ve also not read a book that doesn’t focus mainly on the transmigrator so there might be a few errors at the start of the book, but I’ll be sure to correct them as it goes on. 2. The first chapters will mostly focus on the building the relationship between Leon(MC) and Dean(Transmigrator) so it might be a little slow paced. That should be all for now, if there’s anything else I’ll put it on here. Okay, now, get reading. And I do hope you stay with this to the end.

2yr
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SilentWraithz

Writing Quality: Might want to rewrite chapters, but its alright Stability of Updates: Nice! Maybe its because the author just started, but the updates are chapters every day or two. Story Development: Well made and is quite interesting and entertaining, especially the conversation between the two people. Just need to fix the grammar part to be good. Character Design: MC is very straightforward and at the same time the one who thinks before he acts World Background: Not quite sure about this one, but things who have been better if things are explained a bit, like levels, techniques, and how the new world works and such. For the most part, its alright.

2yr
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