/ LGBT+ / My best friend (gxg)
摘要
Emily and Bella have been best friends since the day they were born.
But Bella hid a huge secret from Emily .
Will this secret affect their friendship or will it change into something better?
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
The overall story is good, the characters have some depth and the world is developing. The thing I find a missed opportunity is the pacing. Namely, the initial confession out of the blue could have taken more chaps to add some depth, the kidnapping would also need multiple chaps to fill the gaps( no need for r a p e depictions, just flush out the time period) and finally, the time gap has many holes to fill, ie the marriage, the shift in personalities(or unmasking), the birth, battle with sobriety. Other points that could be fleshed out is the interactions with Emily's parents and her sister. Other than the pacing and holes that can be filled to give some depth, it is a good light novel. I hope you keep postin.
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I enjoyed this book very much. It was interesting and I cannot wait for the new chapters, please add new chapters soon. I don’t know what else to write.