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An avatar is the graphical representation of the user or the user's alter ego or character. An icon or figure representing a particular person in a video game, Internet forum, etc.(credit's to Google-sensei)
A legendary game Avatar(character) that was supposed to be missing for more than 3years from the game "Neverlasting" was transported to a different world of swords and magic after being logged in by the former player John Smith.
What will happen to John Smith in another world now that he is stuck in the body of his old avatar Leon Greed?
*I don't own anything that is referenced in this novel, Not Naruto, not Terminator, not Bleach, not Samurai X, not Lemons and etc..
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this is a good read.. unlike any other novels this novel summoned 1 hero from the human faction the 1 hero summed by the goddess.. now who will get the most achievement.. haha
This is definitely worth your time, although there are currently only 5 chapters posted. I hope to see more updates soon. I have high hopes for the future of this story based upon the potential I see within its chapters.
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Binasa ko palang Nung isang araw tapos nag antay pa ako ng ibang chapter tapos kanikanina pag ka refresh naka on hold na. Taena yan. Come back quickly author and finish what you started. Para sa review: -Good story has a lot of potential -Grammar although not perfect is better than the average -Change character attitude towards girls NO HAREM
I like the stories I just want to give a review. Keep up the good work. Ft fggghf r7chydjdgshfhystuwfistaudysuahdksuduskgagjshkxgkzthGkxhmxhkzrusykxhk .
Muy buen trabajo y gracias por la gramática. Muy buen trabajo y gracias por la gramática. Muy buen trabajo y gracias por la gramática. Muy buen trabajo y gracias por la gramática.
Not to bad. Sentences are easy to understand. Over all story is awesome. Author's humor is really funny. Although, he is a little overpowered I find it acceptable as he looks like a guy who would use his Opness for face smacking. Currently at cp 6. Ill be waiting for the next chapters.
Really liked the character and the world overall the freedom given to MC is very cool and refreshing especially in the fact he is ultra OP would like more chapters if possible as the story has a lot of potential and could blossom into something even more awesome!
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Continue the damn book. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Continue the damn book
Overall it's a good start, but where's the rest of it??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Took me a lot of courage to write this, so I hope you guys enjoy it. This your typical Overpowered MC being sent to another world. He wasn't sent there to save that world but rather as a reward for helping the God's. As for why he was given such a reward, please read it in the novel itself. Vote if you like it. Thanks.