Mushoku Tensei: Reincarnated as the Lightning Flash

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Mozuto

Yuuki? Konno Yuuki?! from sword art online?! INTSTANT 5 STAR I ALSO WANNA SAVE HER LETS GOOO!

LV 14

GloryForAll

It’s ok, but just ok. Reminds of something I would find off of Wattpad. Trying to make things too dramatic for no reason. The dialogue was also extremly robotic.

LV 14

DaoistyNo0h2

this fanfiction is really good. The integration of the MC into the world is beautifully realized. The author really tried to show her interaction with the family. The only thing is that she very easily let go of the past trauma, given the scale of the nervous breakdown. I hope, over time, we will be shown a greater influence of the MC on the development of Rudeus and the plot. Thanks author!

LV 14

Idontcarereally

This is very good lots of detail in world building and good characters the only problem I have is that the dialogue is a bit of. They just speak in a way no one actually would, I get it’s a fantasy world but it’s just weirdly unnatural. Other than that everything is well done and great work so far.

LV 12

Reymond_Ferin

This book is really good. those who wanted to read a good book this one won't disappoint. its updating stability is truly amazing and even with this updating speed writing quality is not compromised. this book is a journey of emotions and hilarious moments.i Hope it continue for 1000 chapters and recieve fans approval.

LV 4

I_am_Inevitable

I thought this is the "healer" you're talking bout

LV 4

Rakshahsa

This story story has great grammar and pacing However, everything else is drowned by an absolutely ridiculously huge avalanche of unnecessary descriptions drenched in fancy and complicated words It seems more like the author is trying to sell us his mastery over english instead of his book, Because of that, reading the description portions feels like a huge drag. The actual conversations are exaggerated and annoying to read it gives me headaches trying to imagine real people talking like that.

LV 14

Joko_satoru

Too dramatic not my liking, sorry. But 5 star👍

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KingSalvation

the storu is ok. It would have been amazing if it weren't for the repeating words and robotic interaction. Instead of imagining the people in the story in an adventure setting, i see them in a noble party drinking tea.

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Goeti4

good stories, the thing I judt dont like is the interaction between characters, it feels like robot?

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FujiwaraNoMokou

REVIEW SHOULD BE MORE THAN 40 CHARACTERS...

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Reymond_Ferin

I really enjoy this book. although it does not feel so lively. but as things are going on there is no doubt it could be a wild fire 🔥

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Amenomakageuchi

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Rinat_Bekkuzhinov

Пока всё идёт хорошо. Этот фанфик меня заинтриговал ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀