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A fifteen-year-old boy was walking across the street in his hometown however his walk was interrupted by a truck speeding his way. The body sadly didn't manage to survive however find a blessing in this disguised curse the boy met one of the first Primordials and is now on his new Journey!
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Hello everyone Tobi is back again with another Multiverse Story this time done right! Aww yeah this is the story that is going to have an end! ...Probably
Way too confusing ,like the plot is changed whenever author liked. MC is an air head like seriously why make him an air head and it's on Extreme level, even idiots can know what is happening. He is very intelligent other stuff like politics but emotionaly why make him so much of an idiot. I don't get it.
It certainly is a good ff so far (ch 20). The goal of the mc was given to him at the beginning, wich is to replace a primordial being after it dies. He is reincarnetd into DxD verse as a Duke of the Devils and has nearly no memorys of his past life, which is something not seen so often and makes the story a bit more special from all the reincarnetad/transmigrated novels where the mc knows everything about physiks because he was a university student. I don't like the Tokyo revengers part of the story that much but it was said that it would end in ch ~24. No forced plot and cliches so far A good read - Keep up the good work (Sorry my english is not that good)
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The story is great. Writing Quality is also pretty good. There is great character development I also liked the brotherhood part but now that they are dead or to be more precise the fact that Arakan's closest friends pushing him to the darkside kinda disappoints me. In your previous novel too you made the Mc have a dark phase and ended it at that. But now the fact that Izachin and kakuchan were actively trying to push him to dark side makes this much worse. I just hope he grows out of this phase. Make no mistake I hate one dimensional snow white personalitied MC's like that smartphone isekai guy but I also hate Edge lords like Kirito. However the fact that his brothers betrayed him makes it super sad. Well at the end of the day these were just my thoughts and you can do what you want in this novel
揭示劇透 ..................great Novel............................ 10/10..................... good...............I'm just gonna put dots now......................
The story is going great so far as expected from Tobi's fanfics amazing plot so far and Tobi has proved a lot form just like 4-5 months of writing so amazing evolution of him
Great so far. the mc did not skip directly into his 17th birthday. yes tobi did skip mc's first five years but mc is actually slowly developing his connections. Please auther don't give mc any love interest, if you need to put Irina as his love interest before she become's an angel. Anyway as I was saying great novel so far. Also thank you for the quick updates but please don't push yourself author.
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my question is will he get his people back or are they gone for good I really hope they aren't gone for good that would very much suck like seriously
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You know the concept of the story is very good but while reading it feels like the storyline is all over the place. Other than that it is the a very nice book definitely give it a try.
Una antología de primordiales... ¿Resumen este libro? Y todo por un joven y sus Viajes a multiversos de su alma perdida. Y lo que hizo entrar para descubrir la reencarnación en héroe o antihéroe (si estas en el WPC #308) Anotar: Sus 50 capítulos tienen ya: 683.6K Vistas Felicitaciones: Tobi. tuve que aprender son FanFiction en Wikipedia. Resaltar: Una excelente descripción de un estado llamado "extásis", que es cuando tu cuerpo queda inerte, mientras que tu alma se eleva y puedes mirar "mental y consciente" tu cuerpo. Y pensar y decidir cosas.
For a book with fifty chapters, it certainly has a lot of views, which just goes to show how really good the story is. Keep up the great work, author!
LOVE THIS IT IS AMAZING, MUST READ RANDOM SHUT BELOW MUSK HAS FORSAKEN ME KNOW WHAT TIME DO YOU THINK YOU'LL HAVE THE RUMOUR THAT WAS LITTERALY JUST A LITTLE MORE TIME DO YOU HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND TOO MANY TIMES IN THE HOUSE OF REPRESENTATIVES AND SWEET AND AND SWEET DREAMS OF THE BEST STAND USERS CAN BE CAN DO DO DO YOU YOU GET GET A THE RUMOUR MILL IS NOT GOT THE BEST STAND USERS CAN BE FOUND ON THE RUMOUR MILL AND THEY WERE TIMED SO INNOCENT PEOPLE
This is my first genuine review on this site, to be honest this is prob one of the best DxD fanfics on this site i enjoyed every chapter and Tobi is prob the best author out there for interacting with his viewrs and he values their opinions, and as of the lastest chapter i’m enjoying this and i can’t wait for more.
Very good👍.I hope it's not on hiatus, because I read some good fanfic but the novel is on hiatus.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥........., .................. ........
I like this book very much, like how the character development and other characters how they were shown then concepts of other animes like the drinking something in boul for the brother making thing xD but honestly I am looking forward to the book because the main storyline is started today so i will write my review again after 50 chaps or something
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Only one star for char design as there is nothing og but it is a great fic regardless everything seems to be going great would be nice to see a little angst however it has barely started so nothing to complain
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