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摘要
Makoto Kaoru got reincarnated and received a guild building as a cheat and with this cheat, he needed to protect his world and the other world in the multiverse.
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The MC will not be insanely overpowered but still on a tolerated level and the main enemies will not be too weak or too strong, I will try to make it balance as much as possible.
Will there be a harem? I love harem but I don't know whether I will add it or not but expect it a harem will exist in the future
Note: I only own the MC, the other characters belong to their respected authors/creators
the cover is not mine, it's made by Parum so feel free to contact me if you want me to change it
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You should edit the chapters and make the first letter of the sentence a big letter.It's hard to even rate this properly because it's hard to read and it makes my eyes ache.
the first sentence of this novel [Inside a small but luxurious bedroom, there is a handsome boy who has just awakened.]Now, you will understand how this novel will be. It's just a translated novel, and the grammar is written in a way that resembles how Chinese is translated into English, which is disappointing."
This novel desperately needs an editor. The number of run on sentences are annoying as hell. I was quite excited to read this at first from the premise but once I got into it I couldn't continue reading.
this is shameless author, please give your suggestions and criticsas long as it will make my story better i'll take all your critics
Just another system fic. I have come to despise them. It's take all the fun out off character development and give power to cheaply and without effort.