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What would happen if a modern influencer with no skills found themselves sent into the past with the addition of Immortality? Suffering ensues.
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At the start the mc is an unlikable twat but you get attached to him not in the good way as you've read the synopsis he will suffer so you want his arrogance to be squelched which happens in the current chap he isn't much of an unlikable asshole from the beginning all the surprises must have made him realise he could die so easily in this world if not for his immortality overall intresting idea
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I think the author should work on this novel more instead of Steel Wastes. The thing about Steel Wastes is that not many people play those types of old games, everyone probably reads the Witcher, watches it on Netflix, but nobody really plays the game. I have a game and all I play is Basketball, Soccer, Kick Boxing, etc... maybe A Dragon Ball Z or Naruto to change things up... You would reach out to a larger base with an original novel like this instead of fanfic that nobody is aware of anyway.
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Hello fellow readers, I come with a message, that will make you rejoice. This webnovel that I present to you is insanely good. I am not one to write reviews, but this novel has compelled me to show my appreciation for the Author’s masterpiece. How can I comfortably enjoy and binge a book, without showing any RESPECT to the creator of this splendid book. THE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT = OUTSTANDING You begin the novel hating the MC’s character, as he is a prick, as the story progresses you start hoping for the sheltered protaganist to shed his petty worldview. His character reminds of Scrooge from the Christmas Carol, since both protaganists are moulded by their hardships for self-betterment. WRITING QUALITY/ GRAMMAR = A PIECE OF FRESH AIR Honestly, the writing quality is top-notch. The grammar is perfect, and spotless. This addictive novel is SS-tier, in my opinion. CONS: -THE BOOK COVER- -THE TITLE- -SYNOPSIS- In my opinion, they should be polished as it’s hard for it to be noticed. This is highlighted as most trash novels retain a large amount of fans from the art of the book cover. I won’t say names; that would be too pitiful.
I sincerely enjoy this book it has great potential and I'm excited for the future of it of course there are a few things but they'll most likely get resolved in the future like the world around the main character like is he a time traveler or is this a completely different world I don't know and I'm hoping to find out soon
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Good story that author can work on after the witcher ff is over. Great potential, well written and good progress. I like how MC is changing. There are some idiots who say he is beta. What do you expect him to do he is from the modern world and knows nothing... of course he will rely on a girl especially if she is the only one willing to help him! I am waiting for updates.
Terrible story terrible plot terrible characters terrible writer... this is so bad the author seems to face up writing all together for life.
i wrote this long ago but this was a trash story. the author deleted my comment so I'm back because this is a crime to all people who read write or enjoy a good book. truly one of the worst stories on the site.
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4.9 / 5 Great story so far with tons of potential! Don’t be dissuaded by the initial douchebag of an MC, there’s already considerable character growth by chapter 13 and I can only imagine him becoming more relatable over time. Also the mystery behind the initial ‘happenings’ of the story are really driving me crazy so I hope to see a resolution in a couple years or so! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)b
Will not lie the story was pretty great. Though the ending was weird to say the least. Given that the author is not writing this anymore I will say this is complete (?). At some points I got annoyed at the sheer stupidity of what was written but I think it was made up Soo after. While I would ask for more, it's sadly finished(?). Bye and if ur just reading this I hope it provides as much entertainment as me to you.
Not much to say besides this novel is so fucking good!!! I am the fear of all authors. Books is my body, and Stable Updates is my blood. I have created over a thousand annoying comments. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to irritate many lazy authors. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Updates Works!