摘要
Lucas, a gifted singer in search of his voice and purpose, witnesses his life take an unexpected turn when, amidst a captivating performance, he collapses and awakens within the body of another individual in the captivating world of the renowned series 'Modern Family'.
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don't stop. keep writing this story it has the potential to be awesome. i like that he doesn't have system. while i do love modern family gacha i feel this has the ability to be just as good or better
Shameless classic review by the author MUAHAAHHA Guys, I really need constructive criticism! If you think there's something I can do better, don't hesitate to say so, I haven't written anything in a long time and I'm a bit rusty! So, any constructive criticism is welcome :)