摘要
I wasn’t born a nobody. I wasn’t someone to be looked over. I wasn’t just ‘someone’. I was someone near the top. I had people’s eyes on me.
I wasn’t a mistake.
I was blessed.
Now, in this new life, it seems like I have to start over…
… as the complete mistake the universe itself had created.
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I do not own Naruto, but do own the OC's.
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Happy 100k views everyone~ I'm going shameless on this one review because this is a great milestone, for me at least. I don't really know what "views" mean, but hey, I've reached a fair amount to say that I've come far ^~^ I guess this review is a reward for myself since I kept missing milestones lol I just hope everyone who reads, and will read, this self-insert oc story will enjoy and have fun reading~ I hope you all stay with me until the end~ Thank you all for reading~ -EmzySS
Liking this story a lot <3 Grammar's good with rare typos that are forgivable. Liking the way the story is told. The only bad thing is updates.... well that isn't really story's fault tho.
Its a really amazing novel from story to mc character design to plot. ....................... ..................... ................. ............ ...... ... .. ..... ........ .............. . . . .
I like how the story developing so far... Not so rush.. good background story... and you can really immerse yourself in it.. just hoping that you can update faster✌... also i'm hoping that you don't dropped this because its one of my fav already😢
Guys very good story so far nara clan is one of my favorites in the naruto verse the story is good the quality of the chap is good and the length let's try to get it to the top 100 loving the novel so far keep going buddy
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Anyone know how much rating require to be count as enough rating? I curious because many fanfic have not got enough rating yet... only the most popular one that have it... even if their fanfic not so good
Story isnt too rushed, and characters are relatively well developed for a fan fiction. The plot seems pretty intriguing, especially for an MC that is developing to be pretty OP. I honestly think more regular updates would help this novel move up the rankings.
A truly interesting story. - The writing is great. It is only small typos, nothing headach causing. - Updates? Author already gave a reason for it. Might become more stable with time. - Development is a little slow, but I feel it gives time for perspective and readers guessing. - Can't say much, MC is well explained, we can see where his choices come from and new side characters have hints about them which can be further explored. - It is Naruto world. Some new mysteries, that are well placed and sensible.
Go, hun! Love you! 😘 Continue your work, okay? You're writing amazing stories 😍 This one's especially good! You did well! 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
i love this so much. please update this at some point cliffhangers are the worst. ..........................................................
Is the story bxb or romance??? ..............................................................................................................
The story is good and the other characters are well made and fit right into the original story. However, the mc is not, he's not very smart for someone that's 28 before his death and it's like he's trying to tell everyone that he's reincarnated without saying it.
The only way to see if they have to be in the same room and I will have a talk with her about this and she said it was good to see the 4th floor of the morning to you my friend I am not going to be able to make sure that you received this message from the morning I will have to do it on the morning of the morning to you my love for ever I have no idea where the other day I was
Rednjh have a great weekend and I will be there you are not interested I will get back to you with a few of my friends are coming to you for work and will get a good picture of the other one is that you can get the Gods the Gods the
Itachi and Saske take a liking to a trap protagonist. Droped there. Let them fuk him without me reading it. 140140140140not funny at all140140140140