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摘要
A simple boy meets his end due to a bus after assuring his parents he'll be someone. He's given a second chance at life, how will this lazy boy proceed?
Read to find out
----------- Do read this if you want
-Okay first things first, I'll appreciate it if you read the first chapter rather than this synopsis.
-Am a little new to writing so please bear with me, with time I'll improve
-English is my main language, if I make mistakes then criticize me
- I need comments so i can improve so feel free to commentate (don't be shy like me)
This story is for fun but I still intend to reach the top of power stones ranking with it so please do support me.
I only own my mc, MHA belongs to Horikoshi Kouhei and other aforementioned characters belong to their respective owner. Thanks for your time.
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On the first chapter I already found myself disappointed, as the MC would reincarnate with a curse and having to pay a certain "price" for his Quirk. (Also the Quirk he choose, in my, opinion is a bad choice as there are plenty more and better once) But since it was the first chapter I choose to continue and not form an opinion already. But then I have reached chapter 9 where the author revealed the curse the MC received from God, it was "Hero Heart" - letting the MC know when someone needs to be saved and forcing the MC to go there and save that person. For me that was the breaking point and I dropped this fanfic.
The fanfic is not interesting at all to keep the readers engaged. The choice of the quick or wish is kind of bland. The cringy situation with the zero two is also bad. I read uptill chapter 15 and its not interesting at all with very few development on the path of storyline.
11 chaps and the Cringe is too much, im out .........................................................................................................
BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!! BORING!!!
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honestly, just reading the first auxiliary chapter and the comments made me too lazy to read the story, seriously, you take something “normal” like “air manipulation” that a normal person would think of as something like Avatar and turn it into this?? completely ridiculous, you made so many virtually invincible powers that I don't want to read. please take the criticism seriously as I am being sincere and not just trying to say bad things. think again when you do this part about powers for characters, your idea was ok for the most part, but the rest we can't say the same.. remembering that I didn't read the rest of the story because only the first assistant made me give up on the idea of following this and went so far as to bring me in to do the analysis
I'm still waiting... Don't mind me. 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
Mc is too lazy and an idiot.................................................................................................................
The book is great, but the mc can be dumb/overthink things at times. Like when he killed the Nomu, if it was human looking I would understand, bit it wasn't. I'm not a psychopath, I would kill the Nomu without remorse. If something looks or is human, I'd rather not, like a demihuman or human, but if it doesn't look remotely human, no remorse, even if it once may have been.
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"–Hardship is the true friend of a hero! Hardship is what shapes someone to become a hero! And hardship is what makes someone to strive for the path of hero!"
I don't think the he read MHA he treats quirks like super powers like most Fanfictions on here but he puts in a random OC for no apparent reason she's just there
The protagonist is lazy and therefore the story is boring. El protagonista es perezoso y por lo tanto la historia es aburrida. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Would highly recommend this book, the author has made a great book about mha and i hope they continue the book as its one of the best i have read
Keep on posting new chapters.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is nice. Can't find words to put it but the review is forcing me to write all this nonsense even though it cannot be described in words.
this is a good novel, and I like it, especially since the update is not slow so yes I will support this some times but can you tell me the name of the two side stories, I liked them
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Hey there, with my story reaching 20 chapters in a way, I believe it's time I post my review. firstly like all authors, I'll be shameless and give myself a good 5 stars, nothing wrong with that. now I'd like to address some issues and tell you what you can hope for in the future. Why is mc lazy? This is quite simple, I gave him an op quirk and I don't want him to be op immediately so I made him lazy so this isn't like am op because I want to be lazy but rather am not op because am lazy. Why did you give mc such a lame curse? Many have complained about the quirk and I believe it's time I explain something to you. this curse was simply given so I could give a reason for my mc to go to U.A if he didn't have this curse then why bother going to school a second time to become a hero when he can just wake up one morning and decide to become one? Also, this curse is important for the development of this story as many if not all arcs are given sense by it. Now I want to tell you this, this story is great and I have many plans for the future so do take some time to read it as I plan to make this story one of the, if not the best, MHA fanfic in webnovel. it'll take a while to reach the level of people like cornbringer and joker but hey everything is a step-by-step process. Thanks for your time.