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摘要
What is after death?
It's a question asked by many, but doesn't have any answer.
Here is Jōichirō Saiba who got reborn in the world of My Hero Academia, after his death. He have the meta knowledge of this world thanks to it being a manga and anime in his previous world.
Thanks to the meta knowledge of his, Jōichirō knew that it's going to be rough ride, but he didn't think much about it as he just wanted to do what he likes in his new life, which is cooking.
But, fate have other decisions for his life. He met with important people who would become a villain or a hero in the future and he started to change their life for good, unintentionally.
The butterfly started to flap it's wings and changes started to take place, his meta knowledge advantage started to be a waste. Did he despair knowing that? Not at all, because he didn't want to be the hero of this world.
That decision was also thawed thanks to someone else, and he decided to be hero even for one day.
This is his story, the story of Jōichirō Saiba, it showcases how Jōichirō became The Greatest Hero Karna.
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I'm writing this review as the views of this fan fiction have reached 1M. And I would like to thank the readers for that, because of they didn't like the novel and add it in their library and making this top 4 four in popularity at the beginning. Anyway, this is how I see my story:This story is a non-harem one, but people might not like the pairing I have done.MC is OP for MHA World. I didn't give him any kind of wishes, just that he reincarnated there with memories of his past life. His quirk is similar to Sebastian Shaw/Bishop/Vulcan from Marvel.He have a family of four consisting of Father, Mother, Little Sister and him.He saved Eri long before the time of her rescue by using the heroes. He just informed then everything he knew about the Yakuza from his past life and also some investigation from him. It might be not the cup of tea for youth, so my advice is keep moving or read.
I like this story cuz the quirk is powerful but seems like a actual power that someone in mha would have and not some magic that god gave him. The fights are aright too. The dialogue kinda bland where the mc isn’t really get Involved that much but I kinda like it more than the author shoving there self insert into every possible event that happens even when it doesn’t make sense. The only thing I can truly say is bad about this novel is the romance. The mc has a single girlfriend and doesn’t have a harem. Wonderful. I don’t like harem and I think it’s bad. You know what’s also bad? A 23 year old dating a 16 year old. This age gap is downright criminal, like they started dating while the mc was 12 and she was 18. This is weird bro. Like just make him date one of his classmates, at least they are around the same age. Also grammer is good and updates are consistent
There's only a few good things about this fanfiction which is essentially a diary of mc's life in MHA which would explain the lazy approach to details. We're thrown into MC's new life with a few sentences, his motives are poorly explained and that's fine because it's a fanfiction on webnovel and none of us are here for clear details. However, the author clearly doesn't spend as much as a minute polishing chapters after he writes them, because if he did he'd realize a lot of the interactions are just poor, they're borrowed from the actual source or add little semblance. His quirk is creative I'll give it that, but to be honest other than that this is just a boring read. 5/5 For Updated 3.5/5 Grammar because it's not really that bad tbh but it could use a lot of editing 3/5 Story Development because again just same story with a few changes here and there 2/5 Character Design because mc is really obtuse. 5/5 World Background because again, it's fiction.
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A story with a great concept, but the character has a problem. You don't feel the feelings of the character. His power is fun. It seems there's some development for you. قصة ذات مفهوم رائع لكن الشخصية لديها مشكلة لاتشعر بالاحاسيس الخاصة بالشخصية قوته ممتعه يبدو ان هناك بعض التطور لك
I got to the end of the synopsis until I realised it was 'Karna' and not Karma 😭 Haven't even started it and I don't think I ever will, but 5 starts for managing to outsmart me, you sly old fox.
Story is quite plain, I am not telling that its bad like some overly rushed or unplaned ffs. It just don't make you invested in story. It seems to me that author is not good at writting action scenes and interacting scenes(whole school time dialogs look like some awkward moments when you don't know what to speak of..). Some plot arcs are directly skiped. MC here knows plot and changes some matters but sometimes just ignors complitly(like Momo going to the Uwami hero's intership).
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The story is good and fun there seems to be a lack of Character development when he communicates and when he interacts it seems that the personality is empty there is no kind of feelings and interaction The strength is fun and strong and it seems to have room for development A good family His relationship is good but the personality lacks some kind of feelings and thoughts and dialogues It lacks a lot especially when the main character
great story keep up the great work and do your ... ................. ................... .. ........ .......... ....................................................................................................................................................................................................
Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.
The best BHNA or MHA fanfic novel. i love his ability. i love the positive change due to mc.
outside of the creepy romantic pairing its a pretty good fic.. only things id even bother mentioning is that the mcs power is a bit OP and boring at the same time (at least how its presented in this novel) and the weird pedo romantic pairing
The story is pretty good, it's a little rush in the begging (Entrance exam, quirk test and that heroic test in pairs) but to be honest anyone how read MHA fics is kinda tire of reread these parts anyway. The MC is likable and very OP, I like it, but depend on our taste. At this moment the story is very short 19 chapters, I 100% recommend if you like non jerk, non dark and OP MCs. I will be waiting for more.