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A boy who was sent into the world of MHA with the powers of Luffy's devil fruit to please a ROB. Watch as he becomes the strongest he can
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Not bad so far. I just found this novel 10 mins ago. Hope you write atleast 40-50 chapter before you drop it. ............................................................................................................................................................
…., I'm having trouble evaluating, after all, I couldn't even finish the first chapter, but here goes. 1: The mc apparently lives in a world where even the professor likes one piece and kicks him out of the room for giving spoilers, besides going to read the chapter right away…, okay right. 2: The mc had the typical reincarnation trope slightly altered to give some comic relief, but it just made me roll my eyes. 3: where i left off, mc chooses to be reborn with Luffy's fruit, when he asks about Haki, god(which happens to look like Oda to him) says yes he can learn, when he asks if others can learn god he says yes, after all, it's an innate power, that part that irritated me the most, if so, why not let him learn Nen(hxh) too? Ki(DB) or something like that, what a stupid thing, anyway… I couldn't read it later, it's just another story with a generic mc otaku playing the hero, who likes that, I highly recommend it.
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the idea is pretty good and character design is pretty cool let just hope the quality and the story never drop.if i can give suggestion then don't change story too much ,too many change sometimes ruin the story ,i see this in many fanfic.
I gave up when auther added a second Nomu for no reason in the usj incident, but the writing quality was really good, especially considering some people just write like if dialog is the only thing that matters.
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I like the story it reminds me odlf that one mha fic that had the main character have kaidos ability and about rokushiki why not have it a style that was use by Garp
All I see is wasted potential, give it a try though you might like it or you won't who knows 🤷. .............................................
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Not bad!, and if you are going to make some characters of One Piece appear here, why don't you put also Boa Hancock or Nami! Harem FOR Life!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]