/ Anime & Comics / MHA/BNHA Hana Shimura with Kamui
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I am terrible at writing synopsis so here I'll just say this.
Hana Shimura the sister of Tomura Shgaraki survives due to her Magekyu Sharingan, Kamui.
She gets all of Obito's abilities and becomes a villain.
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a nice original take i look forward to where you take this after all not many if at all makes there fanfics about a sibling to one of the originally established villians.
Wao, unexpected turn of the situation, I did not think of finding a story with that of the protagonist having "tomura shigaraki" as a brother, I like how it progresses and how you put the drama, I wonder what decision Rumi will make when she meets her friend but from another side (although knowing her, who has also killed people and fought in clandestine struggles, first she will be in shock and then she will cry and ask me to tell her what happened, and in the end she will choose to be by her side, since Rumi not that we say a person who follows the rules to the letter, in the anime it is shown that he lives far away and does not care about the opinions of others). - I liked your story of Rumi and the she protagonist (I hope you finish it, although only time will tell).
I like it, but I don't see a point in Naruto 2.0. He really cant do much with MC 1. In this world, The version of Naruto would be so much weaker. Chakra doesn't / isn't supposed to exist (Cuz there's no Kayuga), therefore, no Chakra. That means no senjutsu, no sage of six paths to pave the way for "Naruto". Even more so, "Naruto" shouldn't be this strong. Uzumaki isn't a clan here, Kurama doesnt really exist, and he wasn't or Shouldn't be as pressured, after all he's not handling the responsibility of saving the world / saving the villages. He wouldnt or shouldnt grow as fast. With clan bloodline, and Kurama (Who is a little like dark shadow, has its own thoughts) and Chakra, that would actually be three quirks. Going any further would make it four. Besides, the original Naruto cant do anything to something not physical anyways (ex: Obito who only relied on Kamuii). So why is he here, if hes no relivent to plot?? 2. "Naruto" in this world has no plot armour. If he did, then It wouldn't make sense for Izuku to have OFA. From what you've written so far, it seems "Naruto" has a simular personallity to the original. Reckless and brash. If there was no plot armour the original, I really doubt if Naruto would even have the skills to be Chunin, even with Uzumaki heritage. 3. No talk-no-jutsu. He has no tragic pass. "Naruto" has a pretty normal family, no clans and ninjas after him, no corrupted higher-ups onto him, and no 9-tail rampage. MC had her faith in heros at a young age, along with her brother. Sympathy in the plot would be incredibly forced.... So yeah, why does this "Naruto" exist this time?
After MC showed photo of their grandmother to Tomura , she warned him not to tell anybody about it , right ? next day she just straight up confessed it to their mother ........ like are you for real ? yeah , i get it that she's a child , but why would you say it at the first possible opportunity.... When Tomura murdered their entire family on her eyes and mutilated half of her body , did she just tried to calm him down ? Wow , that's some really great sisterly love over here , right ? When All For One took the siblings in , he said to Hana that she can ask for something after she achieved breakthrough in her training , yea ? And this great sister never asked to see her brother for 4 years ( maybe more , but i simply dropper this novel at this point of time ) , does it make any sense ? Overall the story maybe would have been interesting , but the way you presented it was just awful in my opinion.
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Interesting choice with her brother I can see many ways that this could go she could easily become a hero a villain or something else entirely I can’t wait to see what happens next
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I came here to search copper but found gold.Anyway this a good fanfic to be honest also have potential keep a good work and take care yourself author-san...
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the reason this is a 4 is because it isn't the best novel I've ever seen it life changing but it is really good, anyways I'd recommend it to people who haven't read this
This fic has everything to be good and interesting, the choice of powers, the mc being a sister of the shigaraki and anti-hero, has everything to be one of the best fics if the author continues! And the initial 2 chapters were good, good luck with the fic !!
Utter waste of time. Moronic beyond belief. uhh, i really have nothing else to say about it, it's just plain moronic in every aspect of it.................
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Thoroughly enjoying the story! I love how the MC is a villain that affects the world through her actions and not just a few characters lives, also liking how it entangles with the original plot of MHA. Overall I just want more, and wish regular updates continue happening!
This story is really good. The fact that the author used an original character from the manga as the MC of this story was pure genius as far as I'm concerned, and as a result, the changes that occur in the story really feel natural. Looking forward to how this story will play out in the future.
Read it and find out........................................................................................................................
Just because your main character is the sister of my main character you get a five..........................................................