/ Anime & Comics / Metallic System
摘要
Shio, after feeling that life was very empty, a system appears and invites him to travel through different worlds completing missions.
I like to prioritize character development before the apocalypse begins.
If it is the respective author of any photo that I use, contact me with a message or by email and I will remove it.
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- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
look similar to "my touch corps system" or at least the skill and System but the story look completely different even though it's in the same first world (hotd) the mc have a different personality and the story start way before the zombie apocalypse. there's a few grammatical error and the author sometimes get the gender wrong (using she/her for a male and he/his for a female). the story look good so far so keep up the good work.
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Here is the Author, just to rate my work and tell you that if you have any opinion on how to improve the characters just leave it in the comments. I will do a daily chapter or more if I can.