摘要
A celestial being has decided to make things interesting by granting several humans their deepest and strongest desire.
Writing just for fun and then we will see how it goes.
Parents Strongly Cautioned
-- 推薦票
榜單 
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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Dear author: I like the idea but doesnt seem to be properly developed because of the plot being too rushed and the setup during the first chapter having quite few holes in its common sense related to crime scenes and post-birth policies and the soon to be main character stands too much and falls in the "edgy-boy" spectrum. I'll keep replying to this review to add new things but that is it for now. I hope you can correct these bits and pieces and make this story have the start it deserves
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