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For one individual, the boundary between science fiction and reality blurs when they are unexpectedly transmigrated into the Marvel universe, a place where the technological wonders of their dreams are tangible. Equipped with a system that promises growth and evolution, they begin as an underdog in a world of heroes and villains. Drawing inspiration from the movies, comics, and even cartoons, this alternate universe (AU) tale weaves a narrative that, while familiar, brings its own unique twists and turns. As our protagonist navigates this new life, they will encounter romance, face challenges, and harness the power of advanced technology to rise to the heights of power within the Marvel
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寫檢討The rewrite's going good so far with the change in the system I do hope that he doesn't spend too much time in the shadows of the world And having a Gacha is a little worrying but not problematic so far Can't wait to read more
Hello everyone, I am writing through a translator, so forgive me if something is not clear. Author, to be honest, I really liked the previous story, it became one of my favorites, and I am sorry that it was abandoned, I don’t know why, maybe you ran out of ideas or you found inspiration elsewhere and therefore decided to rewrite it, but still thank you for your efforts and please do not delete the previous one, I will reread it from time to time. I will follow this work as well, but I would like to note that in my opinion the previous one was better, but I judge from the first three chapters, perhaps it will surprise me and draw me in as much as the first one. I was a little surprised by the new system, completely redesigned, especially the gacha and status with characteristics such as strength, dexterity, intelligence, etc., it knocked me out of the rut, as for me, the previous one was more interesting, there were no clear numerical boundaries, even though the MC's powers were blurred, but it was more realistic or something. Further, the system itself is about knowledge of technologies of other worlds, previously all technologies from worlds that the MC knew about were available, and this interested me, gaining knowledge in a certain field of science was an excellent idea, albeit a little too much in terms of balance, but I liked it, in this same work at the beginning only one world is available, which the MC got from the beginner's set, I see that thanks to the gacha the MC can open new technologies and, perhaps, even entire worlds, but this bothers me a little, this system becomes a template like some second-rate systems with gacha, and the previous one was, although a little, unique. Another moment in this story, when the main character received Beymex, he was given a choice: to get knowledge on creating an android or Beymex himself, this segment confused me, simply, if he chose the second option, would the android appear in front of him out of thin air? Or, God forbid, would an inventory appear, a personal pocket space where all the main character's junk would be stored. I, frankly speaking, would not want to see this in this story, it would not distinguish it from others where the main character is just a character in the game. Well, in general, I am interested in this work, as I said, I will follow it and wait for new chapters.
I loved the first version so I have high hope for your rewrite