/ Anime & Comics / Marvel: Spider-Man - Potential Unleashed (Peter Si)
摘要
The multiverse is a big can, and we all know how it works with all the crap in the various parallel worlds. But there's something that doesn't change... With great power comes great responsibility!
What a load of comic book bullshit!
There I was having fun playing one of my favourite games, ready to try my luck against the final Boss, when suddenly I was pulled to another reality! Oh well, at least here I can prove to everyone that Spider-Man is the greatest hero ever... if only he wasn't limited by his own creators.
One thing for sure, he would be a Peter Parker who would accept no defeat, in fact he would only aim for victory.
‘Nah, I'd Win’
A story of self-insertion by Marvel.
Si Peter Parker
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I don't understand why fanfic Authors who write a fanfic about Spiderman always makes MJ a love interest even though most of the readers are against it ,it's like they want to be unique but the point is every Spiderman fanfic Author does that so this is the most cliché thing they could have done and their goal to be unique is doomed before it even starts I grow up watching Sam Raimi Spiderman and there are many readers like me who hate MJ and the new comics are not helping in the least
So far I'm enjoying the story. It was really written with a person in mind who understands what it's like to be the Spider-man, but don't forget about Peter Parker. And of course, the author knows the potential of both identities. The martial arts class, the choice to skip a year, and the relationships with the secondary characters, so to speak. In other stories, Peter goes straight to Gwen, MJ, or Felicity. In this story, he'll probably wait for them to come talk to him. The lack of friends really represents Peter Parker in the comics. I never felt like Peter had any real friends outside of the ones he knew as Spider-Man. The story is very good. That's why I'm giving it a rating, because I hope the author doesn't give up on it.
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La historia está bastante bien, el único problema es el harem,el autor ya dijo que va a ser bastante grande y la verdad no veo como podría funcionar
Great book! I like the mc is an antihero who looks out for himself. Please keep it going!
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I have high high hopes for this fic just due to how well it’s written and the plot progressing nicely, my only worry is that the author has a tendency to drop fics quite quickly, I feel this is his best yet so I hope this one goes for a long time
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Well, I have read the first 10 chapters so far. The story feels good, and I don't think there is much to point out. I should clarify that English is not my first language, so I can't really comment on grammar errors and things like that. However, if there's something that bothers me a bit about the story, it's the random information dumps that happen sometimes, or the loose comments Peter makes when he's thinking or narrating. Maybe there's too much 'telling' and not enough 'showing,' but I'm not sure if I understand that correctly. That would be the only thing I could mention regarding my expectations. I hope the harem isn't too extensive, like 'gotta catch them all.' I prefer there to be two or three girls with whom the protagonist establishes a healthy relationship. I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.
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Hello thare, do you remember me? i readed your previus Spider Man story, and wanted to ask you if this one will be keeped and continued and will not be droped, like last one it was shame you stoped writing it, so i Hope this one will stay updated.