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The protagonist finds himself transported into the Marvel universe as a non-canon character with the powers of a Gamer. He only wants a normal life, without noise and fuss and even a harem. He dreams of his own business, a quiet family life with ONE SINGLE girl even his less-than-ideal appearance isn't going to stand in the way of that.
But the God of Games has other plans and is determined to complicate his life at every turn and peace is nothing more than a distant dream for him...
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Original Author: Alex31
Original Title: Берегись Марвел, Колобок близко! (Watch out Marvel, Kolobok is coming!)
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system slave insecure & fat mc... and he stays fat, don't know ruined it for me.
Let's just say this story is a total waste of time, the main character literally remains "obese" and can't change even if he trains for the rest of his life because of the system, and women are forced to fall in love with him, like, it's disgusting. It looks a lot like those hentais with loser protagonists who are fat, hairy and disgusting... Anyway, I don't recommend it...
It's pretty OK I guess...Not really a fan since it's a System Slave type of situation. Emma Frost was I thought to be the main girl but now she's a friend and with Scott it's all just kinda irrelevant.
I like and dislike the main character of this novel. He's a great guy, and I understand his moral dilemma about not wanting to get with women who were forced to love him by a god. However, now that Emma sees him as just a friend, it wouldn't be wrong to pursue her. But I don't think he ever will. The bad things about this novel are: 1) The MC can't lose weight, which is either a weird fetish of the author or just plain weird. 2) The writing is erratic, and the author needs to slow down. 3) The MC is a slave to the system, which is excessive and annoying. 4) I don't like the romance direction. I thought Emma was going to get to know and like the MC, but that doesn't seem to be the case. 5) The MC overshares his powers, and the Loki situation was weird and forced.
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System God literally threatened to send Mc to prison with 20 buff rapists if he didn't do what he was told... But hey it's readable I guess.
I like the idea of starting out in a kitchen, but as soon as it started talking about dungeons, I gave up. It's completely useless, has nothing to do with Marvel and no interest whatsoever. It's a pity there was a good idea, especially the fact of wanting to let him lose weight on his own, which was fun, but no, dungeons in Marvel DC or other universes like that have no interest, they're just a waste of time and words.
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If you like this your a weirdo, it’s basically just about a guy being forced to be obese and then being threatened to be gang raped if he doesn’t do whatever the system tells him
it's beyond my comprehension how this trash is 3rd place in popular. what a waste of time
system puppets MC, has awful layout and has an active warped deity manipulating it and him. Basically MC is forced to be a loser (literally permanently obese?) and has no independence. also gets way too many stats from literally in fast food. literally couldn't be worse plot or balance wise. every second sentence is a massive red flag from a writing perspective and the first chapter is a word dump.
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I like it it's good idea. And mc slave to system isn't correct it's like he got wrong system to beging with . Like he should have gotten like technology or other type of system. And yeah mc should slow little bit down because he is over the place. And him beeing fat is like he is stuck with it and waiting card customizasion option. And it would be nice if he takes Emma or other to dungeon run and reward would be something epic that can benefit all humans..
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it's a decent read i think the personality is really well written but the plot comes off as really forced and it is. i don't really get the whole forced relationships either and then when emma was freed she just went back to her usual plot? i'd expect some development like she actually falls in love with him or something and then he reveals the whole system because instincts lol i don't really know what to say other than this fanfic won't go far good luck man
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