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Marvel: I've got the Omnitrix

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作者: Kqro

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I'm not good at synopsis so i will give you the key words and if you are interested take a look.
Omnitrix, Marvel, anti hero, funny?, Black protagonist, games, Overpowered.

NO SMUT/YAOI/YURI/NTR/NSFW!

Momo after taking a survey got reincarnated into an alternate Marvel universe.

(The complete name is Mohammed, so Momo is an abbreviation.)

You can give suggestions for plots since i don't know everything on Marvel.

I'm warning everyone that this is original, i might take inspiration but yeah. I only own the OC's.

And I take the information and images about the aliens on the wiki but more on the site TheHawkDown.

So yeah... Hmm.. Good read?

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Kqro
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Let's see if i will be able to write a good story.

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ReaderCat

I'm going to give it a four-star review because 10 chapters isn't enough for me to give a healthy review. For 10 episodes, I'd say it's pretty average compared to a lot of fan fiction. But the potential of the story is very strong. The Omnitrix is a really powerful tool for the Marvel Universe when used correctly. Anyway, so far so good. Later in the novel, we'll find out if this is a masterpiece or a disappointment.

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StevenWar

its a fun to read story so far(chp. 3) not much happened, so I can't say much about the progression, but has a lot of potential.

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Tevinlit

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