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The King of Sin has RETURNED.~ 18+ (Marvel, DC)
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寫檢討All I can say is good. ......................................................................................................................
well.... overall pretty good although in some parts it's boring for me. and also I don't really like Marvel x DC. I mean, a fusion of Marvel and DC. If it's the multiverse I'd still like to read.
Im giving you these 5 star review for being one of the many most great and awesome writer simply because there is NO HAREM🥰 also its quite interesting to me cause not only is he in Marvel but also Dc also how amazing would it be if Maleficent/darkfey is in Marvel or Dc its awesome dont you think?😁(With no harem of course just so you can think more of the story more than of the of girls😉 definitely not because im tired of these 💩 and definitely because nobody wants to read pokemon gonna catch them all except those los cough...cough.. you know what I mean😉)
I like this fanfic...but please can you tell.me which part is rewritten..i can't find any difference..If this is the same can you give me a link for the one which was rewritten
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To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.
I like the flow of the story. Im a sucker for OP MC's. But not too sure about merging mavel and dc worlds. Thats too complicated of a merge with all the higher beings and world structure. But honestly disappointed that this hasnt been updated for more than a year
Bastante entretenido 5/5 lastima que quedó a andado ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I have read your previous version and it was so gud so I will read and give you five here as well........................................................
Esta bien y todo pero necesita más desarrollo del mc todo este tiempo solo se le muestra ayudando , consiguiendo mujeres y no se le muestra desarrollando su poder o haciendo más fuerte n que parezca muchas otras personas sean más fuertes que el se contenga , entiendo que no tenga sentimientos pero cuando los tendrá de vuelta y sentirá de verdad , cuando tendrá hijos o será el ser más poderoso del mundo , universo , multiverso , entre otros
Okay read, has better grammar than others I've read, mcs funny, kinda draggy at the later parts but readable compared to others here.........................
whu did you stop writing? are you taking a break or are you stopping the story? I just wanted to ask that and also let you know that this book is really good and you somehow make a harem that isn't awful and is instead really really good. have a good day.
I don't remember if I did a review on the previous version of this fic but honestly this was one of my favourite fics to read and hope others who read it begin to enjoy it as well but if you don't then that's cool everyone has their own opinion
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作者 SirSyko
Can't say I want to be helpful and write a proper review, so ima just say 'YES' and leave It at that